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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - KD on June 15, 2004
    Ooo... trust me.. your lemon is absolutely great! You're going to be the lemon goddess... haha... great story!
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  • From ANON - Darcy on June 14, 2004
    I really enjoyed this story. I think you should continue it if you have ideas, I'd certainly love to read it. However, if you feel it's finished it's wonderful how it is. You are really a wonderful writer.
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  • From ANON - Analia on June 14, 2004
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHMYGODOHMYGODFOHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

    I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! This is the BEST freaking fanfiction in the entire WORLD! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2004
    It was nice and hot, but it could have been a little wild. But, other than that, it was still good.
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  • From ANON - aspiker on June 14, 2004
    Great story and bitchin' lemon! It was just what was needed then --> not hard and fast, but slow, loving and tender. 8-)

    I'm looking forward to reading more. 8-)
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on June 14, 2004
    I have to say that this chapter that this chapter was really great. For a first time lemon writeu diu did a great job. You didn't just jump into the sex and have them going at it -- although I'm all into that too sometimes reading -- but how you've written this story, this was the way to go. In fact, you've left them open yet for more reconciliation (spelling? looks weird). Lemon...anytime you want to write one! You do a very good job in detailing actions and emotions. Hate to see it end, even though I couldn't wait for it to all work out. Well... I will be wng fng for you next update with ending or extra lemon....
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  • From ANON - Julia on June 14, 2004
    That was soooooooo good. Tenderness and sex all toer ler like that. Very nice. Is Ryo going to take Dee back? Things aren't going to be the same. There's going to be a slight difference. Can't wait to see how this ends. Oh, I'm so excitied.
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  • From ANON - Kit_Ya on March 01, 1920
    Wowzer...that was HOT *^-^* I was totally waiting to see what would happen between Dee and Ryo...you know, make up conversation and then you threw in that yummy LEMON scene and totally took me off track...THANKS! I needed a break! hahhahaahha well, I'm sorry for threatening you...I just had to do something to make sure you didn't catch WRITER'S BLOCK which has been spreading around the internet...but, if it makes you feel better I will gladly put down my swords and bombs, give you a break, and review like normal people. *Waves a white flag amongst the battlefield* I surrender, I give up...++
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  • From ANON - Forever_Fake on June 14, 2004
    Sorry... you asked how you did on your first lemon and I think you did a pretty good job. You don't just write about sex, you put deep emotions into it as well. This story has been one huge emotional ride that's for sure. Hit people in the gut, take a knife to their heart, and then have a great way of mending things together. Love your stuff.
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  • From ANON - Forever_Fake on June 14, 2004
    I have to say...YES! And that's for the chapter just read. I think you should continue with whatever you have plannnd nnd not end it here, even though it did look like a gspotspot. But I think you have a bit more to pull out from your sleeve. You did promise a bit with Bikky that I'm looking forward to. You did such a good job with him in the other chapter's, I like to see what yo wio with him at the ending as well. If you want to write another Lemoforefore the ending of it, I'm all up for it, too.
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  • From ANON - AkaTsuki on June 14, 2004
    holy shit i cant believe that was ur first lemon i luuuved it, hell ya u should continue plus u did say ud add bikky (i luv that kid! hes so cute) so its settled u will post that chr anr and we shall read n review it okai *^-^*

    *till hopefully next time ~Aka
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  • From isukichan on June 14, 2004
    oh I love it!! I think your lemon part was perfect!! I really really enjoyed readthisthis chapter please update soon!!! ^o^
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  • From on June 14, 2004
    So you are asking if you should end here or add some more. I think that you should do it. As much as I love all your story ending it here it won't feel complete. So I'm waiting for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Yeah, So idΨid on June 14, 2004
    Damn it, son. I almost forgot. I do want more. That wobe abe a beautiful ending, but if you have a better way of finishing it, I vote for as much as you'll do. =)
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  • From ANON - Yeah, So I Said on June 14, 2004
    The end made me cry. I really cried. That was so cute, you're so talented. You had me feeling the characters emotions, that's so hard to find in fanfiction. Just wow, I don't know what to say. But wow. Maybe I should say it again, maybe it'll help. Wow. Still with much loving adoration.
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