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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - Raining_like_tears on June 13, 2004
    I'm back! Finally got away from some issues keeping me away from reading and reviewing my favorite site and stories! I think that this one of the best emotionally motiving stories there is! I just love the little phrases Dee says to Ryo. I reallly love the part where he asked Ryo what he wanted, and Ryo tensed up, but Dee knew what the reason was behind it. I loved his brief words to sooth Ryo down. Dee is a bit of the wildcard at times, and I can understand why Dee's accepting more of the blame than he's letting Ryo take, but at least he knows how to make up to the guy in a really good (yummy) way! I know I'm late in review, but I sure hope that you update soon. I'd really like to see how this guy finishes up what's not finished yet!
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  • From ANON - Forever_Fake on June 13, 2004
    Sorry I didn't get to review sooner. I got freakin' busy and haven't gotten back to read anything. All I can say is Dee's my man! He's really trying to see to making up to Ryo. Can't wait to read the next chappie. I'm sure they're gonna sizzle in that one too.
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on June 12, 2004
    Where's my update dammit?!!!!! *points a pitchfork at ya* I demand you put up the next chapter or I will stab you with my fork and let my pets eat you for dinner!
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  • From ANON - Analia on June 12, 2004
    ........

    You are just... evil! There are no words to describe how cruel you are with your cliff hangers. If it wasn't for having bought and read book seven, I would have gone insane with waiting! (Of course, considering that I'm only NOW getting to review this chapter, having read it originally two weeks or so ago, I kind of have to apologise for not reviewing asap, especially when I promised I would. Oops.) You really have to update soon now, because I loaned my book seven to a friend who won't give it back becasue she loves it too much. I'm falling deeper into a FAKE manga/fanfic withdrawl, and only your updating can save me. PLEASE update soon! :)

    -Analia
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on June 06, 2004
    Shiza! That was HOT!!! A little too HOT to handle...but of course, I took it like a woman! Hahhahahahah...awwww shucks, my babies are making up and making love! *Sniff* It makes my heart throb with pain to know that my Dee is no longer bi...waaaahhhhhhh!!!!! He's so damn fine too! Anyways, hope to read some more man to man action, if you know what I mean! *^0~*
    Kit_Yang
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  • From ANON - Cole\'sLover on June 05, 2004
    Man, I am so relieved that these guys are making up & making out. This website has been so busy the last two Sat. that I wasn't able to even get on here. Thanks for posting again so soon. This has been one of the best FAKE fanfics I've read so far. Ryo is such a forgiving person and I'm sure Dee will be treating him especially nice for a long time to come. LOVE LIVE FAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^ _ ^
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  • From isukichan on June 02, 2004
    What?I haven't reviewed on that chappie??? I'm sorry!! Well, I love it!! Can't wait to read the next!!! ^o^
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  • From ANON - Julia on June 01, 2004
    *grins like a mad man* OOOO! Hot! Very hot! *eyes grow big* That was good. Can't wait for the next chapter. *sits on bed and waits* LA LE LA LE LA! Hot Dee and Ryo sex. Fun, fun, fun!
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  • From ANON - KD on June 01, 2004
    Dee is absolutely right.... The best part is.. it's not finished yet....
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  • From ANON - AkaTsuki on June 01, 2004
    Luved both those chapters *da good stuf aint over yet YAY* im sorta in a bad mood cus i went to da book store the other day n saw they had fake 7 n i couldnt get it cause i already ordered it but it hasnt come yet *i wanna cry sooo bad* i know i couldve had 2 but then i wouldnt have been able to stock up on all da other yaoi books i got =^-^= anyways i weely weely luv dis story so u update soon Ryoan-chan okai *secretly hoping its not the last chapter;but its oka if it is ^_~*

    ---- i call almost everyone -chan if it can fit so hope u dont mind X3
    *wuv u ~Aka*
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  • From ANON - Yeah, So I Said on June 01, 2004
    Aw, I think I probably love you more. This is without a doubt, the best FAKE fanfiction, I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2004
    Hot and Sizziling!! I can just imagine how wild those two will be in the next chapter!! So, come on with it!!!
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on June 01, 2004
    YES!! Finally, RYO! Good Job! Loved thiapteapter too. And I really liked the way you had them communicating with each other, especially the ending part...ha! Will be waiting for MORE
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  • From ANON - Ica Black on May 31, 2004
    This is the best FAKE fic I've ever read. The emotion, the pain, the love is written so well that it is tangible. I can identify and understand and my heart actually lurches in my throat as I read this. Please continue, esp. with the fantastic sex scene.
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  • From ANON - Analia on May 31, 2004
    You. Are. So. EVIL!!!!!! AHHHHH!!!!!! You are going to drive me completely insane for want of another chapter! I'm going to... do something terrible to you if you pull a cliff hanger like that again! Please update very, very, VERY soon!
    (Btw, you wouldn't mind donating that extra manga 7 to a poor deprived soul, would you? *looks hopeful* Please?) :)
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