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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - Yeah, So I Said on May 31, 2004
    I love you.
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  • From ANON - Julia on May 31, 2004
    Very nice. I ly lly liked it. It wasn't too rused. I had to read it twice before I reviewed. Very good. Ryo and Dee actions. I like it how Ryo was the one doing the "work" so to say. *giggle* It was really good. YAY! I'm on here everyday to see if you've updated or not. I get so excitied when you do. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Update soon. *GRIN*
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  • From on May 31, 2004
    You are really a teser, leaving us in the middle of the best! Any way, now that I've cool down a little I can tell you that: This is definetly the best fiction that I've read till now. You are really a good writer and I hope to read something more from you. I'm really looking for it.

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  • From ANON - wildefyre on May 31, 2004
    Oh WOW!! You just have to post the rest! *Gets on knees and begs* That was hot!!! I love Ryo taking charge! Then again I'm a huge fan of Ryo/seme! This chapter was a tease but very well written. You have nothing to worry about as far as writing lemons go. You did a fantastic job on that bit you just posted. Of course I would have to be listening to the FAKE drama CD "Final Act" and the scene where Dee and Ryo finally get down to business. What a great thing to listen to! Dee and Ryo moaning while reading a hot lemon! Can you tell I liked this chapter? *Big Grin* Can you tell that I want more? PLEASE? Keep up the awesome work and write more Fake fanfiction kudasai?
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  • From ANON - Raining_like_tears on May 30, 2004
    That was pretty good. Don't think I can really analyze this one, though. Loved Ryo getting bopped, that image just made me laugh. Also nice to see Dee in 'sweet' torture... Will be looking out for the next chapter or however you do this...
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on May 30, 2004
    HELLO, HELLO!
    It's been forever since I've last kept in contact with you. It's your fault anyway, you decided to ignore me. So, how's it going? Me, living off bread and water for the past couple of months...hahahhahhahhaa anyways, this chapter was VERY interesting. Not only do my babies hook up again but they also get some steamy make-up pre-sex! And I'm proud you didn't false advertise, if you know what I mean!*winks and nudges ya* eh, eh,? Else, I would've really ran you over with the tractor trailer! It was hot....mucho caliente! Hahhahahahahha I enjoyed it...after aI amI am Captain Hentai...So, here are my last words for ya: "BRING ON THE PORNO!" *^0~*
    Kit_Yang
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on May 30, 2004
    Hey, just got to read your new chapter, and I loved it. Dee's still nervous about how he's behaved over the past weeks, but Ryo's more than ready to show he's forgiven. Thought the part of Ryo getting 'bopped' in the head was funny. Now it's going to be Ryo's turn and I can't wait to see what Dee may have in mind for him! Can't wait 'til you update again...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2004
    How beautiful! I'm so happy for Dee and Ryo *sniff*. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
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  • From isukichan on May 30, 2004
    of course I'll hang on for the rest!!! Hopefully you'll update soon!! ^o^
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  • From ANON - Forever_Fake on May 30, 2004
    Yep, on line, get to be first on this one! I thought you did a great job and I look forward to reading either a revised longer chapter or another one. It doesn't matter. I don't know what else to say about this one, except that I'll be waiting to read more!
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  • From ANON - Wildefyre on May 24, 2004
    Okay, I'm going to try this again... And I will keep trying until AFF actually lets my review go through. I must be reviewing at a bad time or something because I haven't been able to review for the past few chaps. Anyway, I knew right from the beginning what it was that Ryo had been doing but you had me on the Armon thing. I'm glad that Dee has come to his senses finally and that true love is prevailing. You have written an exceptional story here and I would be honored if I could host this on my website. If I can, I'll simply link to it for now so you don't have to worry about sending my the chapters. This story is one all FAKE fans NEED to read!! I'll be looking forward to the next (last?) chapter and praying that this review finally goes through!! JA!
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  • From ANON - AkaTsuki on May 23, 2004
    YAAAAAAY im so happy for so many reasons ^_________^ u made my day cause i jus came from reading a deathfic, so sad but nuf about that im here to praise u. im sooo glad ryo ave ave that dummy ;p .i knew he couldnt give dee up over a (huge) misunderstanding. i also want to know bikky's reaction to dis X3 . n frankly im sorta happy dis isnt over cause its just that good that it would be sad when its over. oh n i gaurantee u that i will be back for that lemon ^_~ keep up the great work especially yaoi since u seem to be damn good at it.

    ~ *huggles n Fake bishies* Aka
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  • From ANON - Analia on May 22, 2004
    Just when I'd thought you'd gone and your best work on the pervious chapter... You come around and pull yet another rabbit out of the hat with this chapter. I must say thaam tam throughly impressed and jealous about you amazing abilities as a writer. I absolutly LOVE your story. I only wish I had half the writing ability you do when it comes to emotions and suspense. I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted, and although I have a good idea about what's going to happen, I am still justed as eagar to read it as the last manga in the series. ( I STILL don't have it yet! *pouts* It's not fair.) Please post when ever you get the ce.
    e.

    -Analia
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  • From ANON - Cole\'sLover on May 22, 2004
    This story is superb. I have really enjoyed reading it so far. I'm glad you are posting the chapters so quickly. You keep writing and I'll keep reading. Dee & Ryo belong together.
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  • From ANON - Forever_Fake on May 22, 2004
    Hey, really enjoyed this chapter even though you didn't follow through with that lemon yet. Just when you thought it was going to end, you throw in a bit of a clinker there. Fits the story. I for one was not disappoinin iin it, either. One last worry, one last heartache, but now it's going to be a nice make-up scene... *on knees ing*ing*... you.... you couldn't... umm... turn something else around... would you... and give us all a heartattack, would you? PLEEEASE NOOO! They've gotten to this part... let them kiss - really kiss - and make up! Oh, and I love the way you write and how you get us to really FEEL for both of the characters. You had me jumping for one to the next to feel sorry fwantwanting to blame the other, then switch-o. You really do a great job. Please continue writing....
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