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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - KD on May 18, 2004
    At last! I've been waiting for this chapter long enough... I was so happy to see you've updated! Ryo is going to say yes right? Don't torture me anymore#@ Sob sob..

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  • From isukichan on May 18, 2004
    What is Ryo going to answer? hm?hm?hm? ^o^ Update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - Julia on May 18, 2004
    Does Ryo still love him? Or is he going to give Dee the Goodbye boot? I dunno. But I reallly loved this chapter. Dee just took over, making sure he ate and everything. Then Bikky leaving for the wed. Id. I'm surprised he left at all. I seriously thought he would say "No" and stay there keeping an eye on Dee, making sure he wouldn't try anything. Oh the agnst! Good job. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Raining_like_tears on May 18, 2004
    Shoot! I missed reviewing the last chapter and you've already moved on to 12. The site seemed to keep having problems and either I couldn't get on or couldn't send a review. But anyway... FANTASTIC! I love this story so much! All the crying, all the anguish! Bikky! Loved that part in both of them. I could see him sitting there tell Dee to give him another $20! And the toast falling out of Ryo's mouth was funny. Loved how that all got out in the open... Dee hugging him. Can't wait until the next and last chapter....!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hong Mee on May 17, 2004
    I just can't say enough about this fic! I've told all my friends and as many fake lovers as possible about it because it's just so good! It rivals some of the all time authors out there and on this site. *takes a deep breath* We're finally getting to the good stuff and I just can't get enough of it. Bikky's reaction was right on target and I felt so sorry for Ryo. I was crying at the beginning quotes and just kept a contast stream of grief until the end. Simply fantastic. I don't ever give credit where its not due. This fic is just... out of this world.

    I'm itching to read the next two chapters! The lovey-dovey fluff is on it's way and I'm excited. Again, update as soon as possible and wow. What more can I say?

    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Analia on May 17, 2004
    Oh Wow... *tries to hold back a flood of tears* You really know how to pour the angst on, don't you? When I discovered your story, I was hooked instantly, and I read all the chapters you had posted. I'd like to give Dee a good butt kicking, but Bikky beat me too it. I hope that something good comes out of all that heart ache you've got them into. Seee ya when you update next!

    -Analia
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  • From on May 17, 2004
    Oka this iz one of my favs i almost cried n it wouldnt be da first time ^^; anyways your fic iz so far da best fake fic ive read i luv da way how u put all the emotions in the fic so goddamn well i read all the chapters at once and i have yet to see any lemons WHERE THE HELL IS IT! heh heh sry there i just havent had my daily full of lemons ^_^; well i cant wait for your next updates

    luv ya ja ne ~Aka
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  • From ANON - Kit_Yang on May 17, 2004
    FINALLY...the KIT has RETURNED!!!! DO YOU SMELLLLLLL WHAT KIT IS COOKIN'? Awesome chapter! I was like alright, finally, home boy is getting his act together! And I LOVED how Dee totally barged in and forced Ryo to get back on track even though there were no bitch slaps involved...hahhahhaha. I'm waiting for the next chapters and yeah, I do have a problem...first you make me cry and break my heart, then you make me totally feel sorry for my Ryhen hen you have me agonizing over Dee's pain, then you make me mad as hell to the point where I was going to commit First Degree Murder on paper, and now, you're going to drive me crazy wondering if Dee is ever going to get back with Ryo...WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!! *grabs ya and bear hugs you* YOU'RE SO HARDCORE! *big kawaii teary-eyes* I WORSHIP YOU! Hahahhahahahhahah...see, doesn't that make you want to update faster? Anyways, I got good news! My computer is fixed and I re-installed AOL...isn't that great? And here I thought GOD hated me! *^-^*
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  • From ANON - Anrui on May 17, 2004
    This is the first fic I've read that wasn't Yu Yu Hakusho and I must saat Iat I'm quite impressed. Keep up the good work. >:`)
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  • From ANON - KD on May 17, 2004
    hehe... And I thought chapter 11 is going to be your final chapter.... sigh.... I'll have to wait again!!! Hey... please update ok> i really want to know what happens next...

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  • From ANON - Dangerously Sweet on May 17, 2004
    WoW.... I love your story, I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh i do hope that they get together, everything was really great, Ryo is such a sweetie, I feel bad that i like seeing him being forced into things. Oh well, your story is great, I'm waitin' for the next chapter with much anticipation
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  • From ANON - Devi on May 16, 2004
    Damn damn damn. The site didn't post my last review. Anyway, you didn't need to offer anrt ort of explanation to me. I understand completely, as I have been there many times before. I wasn't really thinking about the fact that Dee cut Ryo off several times when I wrote that last review. I was just basically wondering 'aloud'...sorry if it seemed as if I was leaving negative feedback of some sort. I have not been disappointed with the fic at all, trust me. :) You've done a beautiful job thus far.
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  • From ANON - Julia on May 16, 2004
    That was good. I loved the scene with Bikky and Dee. It's a bit hard to picture Ryo with facial hair. But it was easy to picture him all depressed and tired and unfed. I love it. Dee picking him up and carrying him to the shower. Very nice. I hope things work out. But not to easily. There's got to be some rough patches one their way to recovery. So good. So good. *sits on the floor and waits for the next chapter*
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  • From isukichan on May 16, 2004
    wanna have more!! Please update soon!! ^o^ Poor Ryo, what is Dee going to do to make it up to him?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2004
    Now, that Dee is there and is helping Ryo, what will he do next? Will Ryo forgive him? Hurry with the next chapteXZa
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