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Reviews for Portrait Without Sin

By : animeyaoi
  • From phoenix682 on October 18, 2009
    This was such a moving story. I didn't want to believe that Ryo had been untrue. I hoped that some kind of mistake had been made. Yet I could not draw my self away from what they were both feeling. I don't know why but I wished that at the end of the story Dee would have mentioned that he was with Ryo on his aniversity and that he saw the light on in the window that never went off. Crazy I guess, don't know why it seemed important. Represented hope on both their parts I guess. Thank you for sharing this amazing story.
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  • From ANON - rara on September 28, 2006
    I LOVE IT! i loooooooove angst and GIMME MORE! XD have any other angsty stories XD
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  • From ANON - Grifter on February 11, 2006
    I love you, move away with me, marry me and I will dedicate my life to making you happy as long as you keep writing. This was....so good.


    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Grifter on February 10, 2006
    I love you so much right now, can I kiss you?
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  • From ANON - Grifter on February 09, 2006
    Really intense.... I love the series and now I have to know what happened. It's different, and unless there's an amazing twist about what Ryo seems to have done it's an unflattering portrait of him, but it's really, amazingly good.

    I'm going to keep going. This is too good. Thanks for the story!
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  • From ANON - neko-mew on November 03, 2005
    hissssssssss i didn't read the reviews before reviwing myself, listin anon you little grrrrrrrrrrrr you know what, you suck! i hate you! fanfics aren't just about the plot of the particular series! you know whta you've soiled FAKE because your evil, well your copy anyways, people should always be free to write whatever they want without some !@%!#heads like you on their tail, going against the author is even worse you know when i read it all i thought was Anon is calling her a whore? hate ta say it luv but your worse, thanks again for the great story and if you ever get someone reveiwing like that just put the signal of a cat in the sky and i will personly type like the wind!
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  • From ANON - neko-mew on November 03, 2005
    i liked it alot, thanks for the good story and never let anyones comments keep you down!
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  • From ANON - Sanada Usako on July 14, 2005
    aha! I KNEW there was a reasonable explanation! By the way, this story is really really good. I'm really enjoying it, the fact that it makes you feel so much is deffinitely a strong point. Keep up the good work!
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  • From on March 20, 2005
    I really liked this fic. The depth of emotion in it really brought tears to my eyes at points, though I saw the whole portrait thing a mile off, thanks to your hint at the beginning. -Grin- Of course, that only made it sadder for me, since I knew that it wasn't Ryo's fault at all, and it had me rolling my eyes at Dee's idiocy. You did a great job of the pair, in my opinion. I don't think they were all that out of character, Dee being as hot-headed as he usually is... though Ryo was a little too soft perhaps? On second thoughts, no he wasn't. Yeah, you hit the characters spot on. The lemon...

    Lemon's are always best when they have a story to back it up, especially a story as good and as passionate as yours. I'm so glad it seems to be turning out okay in the end... it looked really dismal for a bit. But, back to the lemon. It was good, a little unadventurous, especially since the two scenes were very similar. I suggest perhaps differing the second scene a little more? Perhaps Dee couldn't find the lube and he had to use... other methods of getting Ryo ready? Or maybe even a switch of roles? Despite being very pretty, Ryo doesn't hit me as a complete uke, you know? Just something to think about.

    I enjoyed reading this fic, thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - jepp on February 12, 2005
    Wow! I've just finished reading all 17 chapters and am exahusted, but i just had to say thankyou. You are a brilliant writer and i really liked the different view point(especially at the begining) you took on relationships. You kept me guessing till the last moment, though i had my suspisions on whether Ryo was unfaithful or not. I dont really have anything constructive to say on your style, but thankyou and please continue.
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  • From ANON - Neinusan on January 20, 2005
    All I can say about this story is WOW! You did a really amazing job in writing this story. I think you've taken me through nearly every course of emotion there was. I started reading your story elsewhere but came across it here. I am sooo glad that I checked into it. This is a story that hasn't disappointed me, and those lemons... God! Just about had to turn on the fan in the middle of winter. Really fantastic job! I'm looking forward to another chapter since it seems you left it open for there to be one!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on January 01, 2005
    It surprised me to see this delightful story is back. 8-) I enjoyed this chapter...talk about hot, yet very loving and sweet. A good combination in my opinion.

    Keep on writing (this story and others). You've got a real gift for writing realistic stories with well developed plots and characters. 8-)
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  • From ANON - Serpenteyes on November 08, 2004
    This is really well written and I enjoy reading it. Its really sad and angsty, but I hope you put in a happy ending. (I'm on chapter 2) You truly have the gift of words! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2004
    Wow, Awes!! H!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Felicia on August 06, 2004
    I wanted to to tell you how much I have enjoyed your story. I have only just found "fanfiction" and have been having a blast reading it. When I started yours I found it compelling. I know you said that you thought they may be OOC, but I don't really think so. It all flows very naturally to me. I can see them acting in that manner.I check the site everyday in hopes of seeing the nchapchapter. Thank you for a wounderfully realistic and deep story. I turly like how you have doled out little bits of info a chapter at a time. It keeps the reader guessing as to who did what or who "is in the wroung" so to speak.
    Felicia
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