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From ANON - Lychee on August 30, 2004
Oh. My. God. Hakkai?!? Whhe fhe fuck are you doing?!? That's Gojyos monk, GOJYOS!!!! Aahhhhhh (runs around house pulling out hair) and how long do we have to wait for the next insanely long (thank you for being a prolific writer) chapter? *sniffs* I want to read it now. It's so unfaiiir. (falls to ground weeping)
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From ANON - ryushin on August 30, 2004
I want to kill Hakkai, too. that green-eyed hypocrite! *grrrr* I think it's safe to say from now on the group dynamic is fucked sideways.
At least Sanzo moaned Gojyo's name. I so hope it's going to work out for Gojyo and Sanzo. Would I ask too much if I want Sanzo to come
to Gojyo and start things? *yeah yeah, I'm hung-up on that idea!* Naah, too OOC...I know *sigh* Still I'm itching to find out what is going to happen
between Sanzo, Hakkai, Gojyo. I really don't like Hakkai waltzing into the picture but I have to admit it keeps me on my toes and excited to read more.
Still stand by 5x3 action - exclusively, though!!

Goku asking Gojyo what he meant by "sucking him off" made me fall out of the chair. *fucking great*
I think Gojyo and Goku are very much in character all over the story, I like that very much.
But, can't Sanzo be conscious and not drugged in any way for at least one chapter, pretty please? No offense but the effect is staring to wear off
and reduces him a little too much to a wimp, IMO.
Whatever, I'm pretty excited hhe she story is going to proceed with the haunting and the mixed up emotions due to getting into Sanzo's pants.

Very good!
... as expected *wink

read you
ryushin

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From ANON - Lychee on August 06, 2004
I hope you're happy with yourself. I was late to work this morning because I just had to read the latest chapter... damn you! My poor abused bishies! I mean, first the utterly horrific thing Sanzo went through *shudders*, then trying to recover from it, dealing with a sudden appearence of (gasp) emotions!, having a spirit induced seizure, and now poor Gojyo has to deal with all this bullshit from his "best friend" who really ought to think better of him, and a traumitized monkey. Gah! My brain hurts!....write more soon? *makes big puppy eyes* I'm rooting for Gojyo and Sanzo to make this thing work.
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From ANON - Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip* on August 05, 2004
First let me wipe the egg from my face -- for assuming an ending. You have kept up theat wat work and characterization. Hakkai seemed to teeter on OOC, but you snagged him back in -- with grace. Hakkai getting drunk was something to get over, hey hey who is to say something is impossible for her/him/it. �Nothing�s impossible for me� (and that includes getting Hakkai wasted). Giggle

I really enjoy how the passive voice melds with the character in question. You do that quite well. I also enjoy your conversational style. Many times I find myself gasping at the screen and/ or giggling out loud. I like how you keep the reader in suspense -- not quite fully explaining things until you are ready , which at times might be a little longer than the reader wants. Good job.

I didn�t know we could respond to reviews either. I had assumed there was some unwritten fanfic rule about it too. Do you mind if I snatch your idea? I�ve tried responding to reviews via e-mail, but I don�t think my e-mails got there.

Again, thank you for taking the time to write this. Thank you for the entertainment.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*

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From ANON - ryushin on July 31, 2004
YESSSSSS!!! *hugs you

An update - the epic continues!!!
Gojyo WAS an ass that morning - curse his mother's womb. But he was in character, anything else would have been wrong.
I loved that part:
He twisted around on the bed, quite ready to speak his mind now�as Gojyo shrugged his head into shirshirt, pulling it back on in a flex of stomach muscles that demanded Sanzo�s complete attention.
I wouldn't be surprised - but wildly amused - if Sanzo would ambush and jump Gojyo any time soon. * he wn'tn't, but I like the idea!!!

...

Excuse me, I have a nice mental image and a ficlet to write now.
Thanks for being not only a fantastic writer but a good muse as well. *pecks your hand

ja
ry�shin

PS: Hakkai smashed - that's a new one and damn hilarious.
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From ANON - FogWolf on July 31, 2004
Whops! Fe de Errata: a mistake in the last review.
I actually find Goku less brainless that in the others chapters or more thoughtfull. NOt more. that's it!
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From ANON - FogWolf on July 31, 2004
What a relief that I could find your story here! Annoying F+#$s of fanfiction with their attitude!
WOW an UPDATE!! Heaven actually EXISTS! I must thank you for the continuation of this serie AND for answering our reviews that was very considerate of you :bows:
About the answering review: I didn't meaning love in some sex-way -_- , more in an brotherly way. HEeeEW -_-; I'm not fun for Sanzo/Goku pairing... So thanks for the "Goku�s not meant for sex" I agree with you o_o
About the story: Pulp Fiction Style rocks! Your POVs rocks a LOT too. I love the way you put enfasis with the writing typo changing (cursivas on some specific words). The story is so intense and the FACT that you put it in a POV way is so dramatically real that you almost feel it in your skin (creepy), also with the way you're telling a story that happened but Sanzo is remembering it with you in present time...
About your last chapter (8): exactly THAT way a was meaning about the more love thing!! The interaction between Goku-Sanzo-Gojyo was simply TASTY! the protectivenes from Goku: SOO Sweet AND cool, the embarrasment of "GENJO FUCKING SANZO" (I'm still laughing about that) and the "I want more but don't want to be noticed" actitude of Gojyo AND the bozou. lol: Hakkai actually DRUNK. A little funny the fact that you put Goku a lot more brainless in comparison with the others chapters but loved the protective way. What a cliffhanger at the end!
I'm waiting for an update SOON please! I'd just love to see the "analysis" of the erm-events of a sober HakkaSanzSanzo in more embarassing situations, Goku this way and Gojyo, mmm just being him hehe. And what was that at the end of the chapter? Morventventure problems? More evil guys??? XD :grins:
Thanks again and congratulations, I'm a fan of yours!
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From iamzuul on July 30, 2004
Wow. ^________^! I first saw this story on the 2004 Boys Next Door Smut Contest, and I'm so happy to see it here, too! (Obviously I'm not very observant if it took me this long to find such a wonderful story here on AFF.net u.u) I've never read a story where Sanzo is protrayed as so self-destructive, even BEFORE the rape, and though it twists me up inside the protrayal feels so *right*. The way the memories came back to him, first just a tad because of seeing that blanket, and then in the bathroom, the way they overcame him like a flood - and the subsequent urge to cut himself and make himself look as nasty as he felt, and the very human desire to be needed... I could go on and on! It's so perfectly human it almost makes me wan cry cry.

I loved Kanzeon as well, btw, although I'm not sure if she really curses that much in the manga? It fits her personality, either way. She's very coarse for a God/dess of Mercy. ^-^

Oh, and I'm especially pleased with the way you've written Goku (the first chapter from his POV made me very, very hungry. >.
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From ANON - Demon45 on July 28, 2004
*Hugs animegher* Have I told you that I love you?? No?? Then let me rectify that! *I Love You* What a great day this has turned out to be. Just when I had given up hope, you thrill me to no end with not only another chapter but the promise of more to come!! This was awesome. Poor Sanzo. I love him being all angsty!! And I swear I can just hear him saying "Genjo Fucking Sanzo"!! I had really wanted to see what would happen the next day and this surpassed all my expectations. Your characterization of Goku was incredible too. When he wouldn't leave Gojyo alone with Sanzo, I was almost as proud of him as Sanzo was. I love how Sanzo cares so much for him without realizing how much he does. It was so sweet and touching. You always seem to put in these little touches that give us so much insight into not only the character and their mind but but into incidents in their lives too. I feel like I know them er. er. That is a rare gift, to be able to write so cleverly as you do. While I envy you this ability, I am grateful to be able to reap the benefits of your talent. I can't thank you enough for continuing this and I know how long it must take to write this all up and I realize it is terribly crass of me to ask this, but please.....I need the next chapter!!!
BTW-I truly enjoyed the chapter of answering the reviewers. That was so considerate and thoughtful. It was almost like we were sitting around chatting. I liked that. Sometimes you wonder how your reviews are met and it was nice to get the feedback in the other direction. Thanks!!
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From ANON - kazuha on June 24, 2004
the story is really really good but my it just stop right there isn't end already. yeah i really like that sanzo in the breakbown hehe ganbate plz update it fast if there is continous story

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From ANON - yuki-sama on June 13, 2004
love the story XD
but unfortunatly, it feels like most of the charater's conversations have been repeating or refrased...
i'm currently finnished chpt4 (maybe you explained this later) but didn't you write that Sanzo 'lost' his gun in the snow? Then how could he be defending himsel with it? ^^;
Anyway, keep up with the good work ^__^

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From ANON - Demon45 on May 24, 2004
Saints be praised. I thought we would only have chapter 6 and lo and behold my surpise to see a chapter 7. And what a chapter. I forgive the length in thanks for granting me more. I would dearly love a chapter 8, though, cos the next day will be a day to remember for all. Not to mention the next week. I realize I am just being greedy, but you can't blame a demon for trying. You are so right......there was no place in there to pause. NO PLACE AT ALL! Thanks for writing such a great fic and I look forward to another..........hopefully in the near future??? You have a really great way with words and drescriptions that allow the reader to feel themselves inside the room watching instead of the outside looking in. And believe me, in this one that was not always a good thing. I appreciated the realistic tone of this tale and hope you can be tempted to treat us again.
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From ryushin on May 23, 2004
Sanzo, Gojyo, Hakkai, even Goku - they hurt.
So badly and yet one cannot stop reading.

I'm a sucker for 5x3 anyway and there are so few stories out there. The good ones, I mean.
It somehow feels right that Gojyo and Sanzo cannot be together without the pain, although
to this point them getting together is more of a side affect - nevertheless intriguing.
Sanzo's trauma and the effect it has on all people around him, no matter if he wants it or not,
cuts deep. Damn, the hurt is tangible, one can taste it on the tongue while reading.

The story is mesmerizing to a point where it threatens to overwhelm all senses.

The chapter in which we get the inside of Goku - a chaer Ier I would only use for comic relieve - is awesome.
Kanzeon is portrayed as the evil witch bitch he/she is, one had to smirk at that.

I hope you are planning on continuing the story. I would like to know how Gojyo reacts the day after and how Hakkai
will cope with the situation. And I really want to know if Sanzo and Gojyo have actual
feelings for each other apart from hatred and lust. Or will Sanzo simply continue to chase the hurt away and crawl into
Gojyo's bed each night to forget for a few hours. That would open a door to a new level of pain.

Damn, you are really on to something there. Don't stop.

*wow
ryushin

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From ANON - Demon45 on May 21, 2004
Intense!! That is the only word I can come up with. Seriously intense. You have done a great job with this story. Yes, there probably were a few grammatical errors, but when you are reading a story this intense, you either don't notice them or just ignore them outright. I chose the latter. You have captured the characters perfectly. I would have loved to have had a glimpse of what was going on in Son Goku's mind when he was transformed, and would have really enjoyed seeing what happened when Sanzo and Goku woke up. The story was excellent and I too enjoyed finding out the details little bit at a time. I hope you write more.
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From ANON - Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip* on May 20, 2004
I am assuming this was the big finale�.the conclusion? I can see where it is and I can see where there is room to continue the story. This , of course, means you have truly captured the spirit of our love which is known as Saiyuki.

Yes, this chapter had some technical errors. Such is life. We all have technical errors. It is very hard to proof and edit your own work. After all you know what you mean to say and you know what the scene looks like. It takeotheother, and another, and another, to be able to tell if the reader will see it as the author does. This is why professional writers get professional editors.

As fanfic writers we do try to presgoodgood quality work, but we write between school, work and home life. We�re worn out by the time we get to the PC and if someone wants to nit-pick let them.

I have really enjoyed this story. I felt you characterized all of them quite well, and the plot itself was quite good. I like how you kept the reader in the dark as much as Sanzo was, is and will be. You�re OC�s were well flushed out given their level of participation.

Your use of angst is well done. I thoroughly enjoyed your use of metaphor and simile. Your style is relaxed, but detailed and I appreciate that. When I noticed you published a new chapter, I literally gasped at my screen.

Over all excellent work. Thank you for taking the time to share your talents and creativity with us.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*

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