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Reviews for Her Hell

By : WhiteFeather
  • From on May 27, 2004
    I really enjoyed the last chapter and I'm so glad that they're coming out so fast. I really hate to have to wait two to three weeks for an update on fanfics but at the same time d had hate to diminish quality for speediness. Your quality is very high even with your speediness and I'm so glad that Amon is finally taking baby steps towards Robin. You're right, they do need a swift kick in the ass!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Paranoid on May 26, 2004
    Yah want reviews? I'll give ya reviews!

    The shower scene was good. It caught his feelings of frustration and tension. Nicely done.

    The description of Robin waiting paiteinly for Amon to come home read like a neglected wife, waiting at home for the man who vowed to love her, only to leave her to dry up and wither away.

    Amon's physicall frustration being taken out on some unsuspecting woman, rather roughly. Yeah, I could see this too.

    I do not think you give yourself enough credit.
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  • From ANON - Paranoid on May 20, 2004
    Hehehe. Ya posted this over there too. I was quite suprised at the detail.
    But I would like more of this from either here or over there. Just please continue. I realize being at this point in the story is never easy, some would call it the hump (take your mind out of the gutter), the difficult part to get over. I enjoy reading this as you seem to truly stay IC while giving these complex characters even more depth.
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  • From ANON - gina on May 18, 2004
    hello! =).. wow i really like your story, and i have to tell you first. im so sorry, i read your stroy through before reviewing it. i mean. i have to tell you the truth YOUR STORY F*^%ING ROCKS!!!!!!!! no realy it does.. but i can't stand it.. are they.. going to be together??.. i mean.. omg they both are felling the same way.. ahhhhh .
    i love youir story.. thanks so much for sharing!!!=)
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  • From ANON - Mischief on May 03, 2004
    Very good story! Keep up the good writing!
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  • From ANON - Youkai Yume on May 02, 2004
    Loved it, as usual. How incredibly cute, they finally kissed! I hope the lemon's coming up soon....* hin hint*
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  • From ANON - Nightmare on April 29, 2004
    nice work. You can sit at the cool kids table now.
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  • From ANON - Youkai Yume on April 28, 2004
    This is such a cute story, and i absolutely love the way you are porgressing it. Update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - shaid on April 28, 2004
    It's going pretty well. Looking forward to More!

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  • From ANON - shaid on April 28, 2004
    it's a good first attempt. I'm interested in reading more. The characters seem pretty on and the plot is interesting so far. Please Continue!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on April 27, 2004
    I Really love your fanfic it's reallyt good!
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  • From ANON - dunken on April 27, 2004
    This is a great start! fabulous! i can't wait for the next chapter. well, that pretty much sums it up so, 'til next time. ja ne!
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