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Reviews for My Immortal

By : JazzyGirl
  • From RChan on June 24, 2008
    I... am not sure what exactly to say to that... Firstly I suppose I should say that I really didn't find it all that angsty, I really couldn't see the pained emotions in there because the way you chose to make Dee leave was so out of character for him that everything else surrounding it kind of fell apart. If anything would have pulled at my heartstrings it would have been if Dee had died or something and Ryo was so haunted by his memories and ghost that he tried to convince himself that his lover was still alive and there with him. Over all, I'm sorry to say that I don't think this fic worked and I didn't really like it.
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  • From ANON - kitty on January 15, 2006
    i liked it odd enough but you could also turn it into a happy ending by makeing them get back together and say that dee was having secound thoughts or something like that. PLEASE DO!!! i like happy ending much better than sad ones they make me cry.
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  • From ANON - PocketFox on July 16, 2004
    Hm... An interesting take on their relationship, and the story is written quite well.everever.

    While I understand that a lot of times strong emotion can bring on the urge to write to help relieve it, I think if you were really wanting to write a story with this theme (one lover abandoning the other because all they wanted in the first place was sex), you should have used a co it it was more likely to happen to, perhaps even using a different series. It was proven several times throughout the series that Dee is seriously, completely, *totally* in love with Ryo -- the incident that comes to mind was Dee's introspection in Act 13 where one of the things he said was, "Geez, at some point, before I even knew I was doing it... I began to pray he'd stay close to me forever."

    The theme of the story is actually quite good and very tragic, but I just think it would have been better and perhaps more believable if the couple involved was different.
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  • From ANON - Cole\'sLover on May 08, 2004
    AAAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love angst,but God, I felt teary-eyed ALL day long at work over this one. This is one of those sonfic's that you just love to hate because its so sad. Even though it made me want to cry and hit Dee over the head with a frying pan, it was excellent writing. I will never be able to listen to the song "My Immortal" without thinking of this fanfic. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Afton on May 07, 2004
    Yay! Good job =D Its nice to see twists! I really enjoyed it. =)
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  • From ANON - Nekari again on May 04, 2004
    Oh and one more thing... the one above isnt a flame! I loved the fic but GAH!!! * cries* Good job... b/c no fic has ever made me feel that strongly!
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  • From ANON - Nekari( to lazy to sign in blah) on May 04, 2004
    OOOOOOOOOOOO MYYYYYYYY MOTHER F**KING GOD!! Excuse the language but GAH!!! * cries* Nooooooo How could you??? Well if the intend was to make me angery and sad than you succeeded! It was well written, but I have NEVER read a fic were Dee was so MEAN!! GAHH!!!!!! * runs around in circles* be ale all know Dee loves Ryo more than anything.... * nod nod* Yepp yep... * goes and hides in corner*
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  • From ANON - wildefyre on April 30, 2004
    Okay I'm crying here! God my heart was shredding over Ryo's pain! *Glares at her Dee muse* How could Dee be so cold like that? *Sniffles* You did an excellent job with this and the angst level went off the scale! Holy shit! You get a standing O for this one!
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  • From ANON - Nautica on April 29, 2004
    It was well written, but I don't think that Dee would ever do that to Ryo.
    It seemed as if you tried to mold the characters and the storyline to fit the song, rather than choosing a song which described Dee and Ryo's relationship.
    I hope you're not offended. The one good thing about writing fanfiction is that you can write whatever you want and not care what other people think. Although this story is not to my tastes, I would happily read whatever else you write.
    Good luck with future writing!

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  • From ANON - silent angel on April 29, 2004
    that was so sad. but i love that song. i have the cd and as soon as i saw it was a song fic i poped it into my cd player and read on. *sniff* poor ryo
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  • From ANON - muyoluv20 on April 28, 2004
    *-* DAMN DEE. RYO SHOULDN'T HAVE PUNCHED HIM HE SHOULD HAVE SHOT HIM! THE BASTARD!!!! EVIL!!!!
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  • From ANON - Devi on April 28, 2004
    Aw, you know I'm your number one fan, right? I think it was a great fic. Yeah, highly OOC, but that's okay. You know my stance on that! However...

    I'm seeing people line up with flame throwers so youter ter duck. I'm going to say this before someone else gets the chance to. Two years waiting is definitely *not* a quick fuck. Aheh, thought I'd point that out. Eh, but let's assume this is an AU. And hey, writing is a very constructive way of releasing such depressive feelings. Wonderful job!
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