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Reviews for When All Is Said And Done

By : iJ3i
  • From ANON - bob on June 13, 2005
    lol no, no stones and i don't see amon as a typical guy either, i luved ur story i read it all at once i couldn't stop reading it, i'd like to read more stuff by you cuz i luved this story write more.... i'll check ur profile when its not so late and idon't have a graduation to go to, oh and by the way i luved ur style its kinda hard to catch the atmosphere in WHR but you got pretty close and no one was disgustingly out of charater once again i luved it and i luv your sense of humor....write more!!!!!!!!
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  • From Ravensky on April 22, 2005
    Well I have to say I like this story very much and I'm so happy to finally see a Amon & Michael pairing. I find it hard to find that pairing but past that point. I love your story but from what I can tell there won't be anymore chapters since it's been a year or more since you last posted a chapter
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  • From ANON - Miki on March 13, 2005
    Finish the story, stupid.
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  • From ANON - violet on October 23, 2004
    hey, I was wondering.....did you destroy the straight version of this fanfic?
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  • From ANON - auronslover on September 15, 2004
    awww short chap but very happy for a update very exciting chapter can't wait for next please update soon very good fic
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  • From ANON - anonymous on September 10, 2004
    Terrific story! I am soooo looking forward to future chapters. ^__^ And I must say that this story, so far, has the best lemon that I have ever read. I'm serious. :)

    Keep up the great work.

    anonymous
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  • From ANON - auronslover on August 25, 2004
    oh i must say i really love chapter eleven so exciting will robin live? oh please update soon i cant wait thankies
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan on August 24, 2004
    Lol, section eleven has gone to heaven? Hahaha, that's even cornier. :P

    AMAZING job these two chapters. Ohh, poor Michael in chapter 10, I was like "Oh god," the implications that might have been going into his mind, especially just after he and Amon just...you know, lol.

    This chapter and the next have gotten me on the edge of my seat -- now the energy and all hell is breaking lose -- what did Zaizen have planned, to get Amon and Robin killed...*sigh* I hope that doesn't happen. Maybe get injured, but not killed! I hope. It would be definitely crushing for either one of them to die.

    I wonder what's going to happen...I hope they can get to Robin in time before they kill her. And to stop Zaizen. It seems Amon's efforts were just a little too late in stopping Touko at least.

    I can't wait for more to read, you've definitely captured my attention fully. Do you know how many more chapters you'll be doing? I hope quite a few more. ^^;
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan on August 10, 2004
    Yay! Another update!

    Wonderful chapter, I can't help but grin and hide my smile when Michael is feeling the...after effects of what he and Amon did.

    It was so sweet what Amon did, pairing everyone up and out so he can give Michael a little food (lol, best way to get to a guy's heart :p). They're relationship is starting off so nicely...*sighs happily* Though, I can't help but wonder when things might start heating up. Especially with Amon wanting to take Michael to his own home. I mean...whoa, they could get into serious trouble. *shakes head* But I believe, or hope, everything will be all right in the end whatever they choose to do.

    I'm still pretty mad about Zaizen and Touko -- what heartless people, but my curiosity is still brimming with wondering why exactly they are doing it -- just to torture Robin more, or is there more motive than that (perhaps something to do with Amon?).

    I'm also happy that Amon is deciding to help. He can be like one of those background helpers that fixes stuff when they accidentally go wrong or get more undercover information that's more accessible. Heehee.

    Wonderful chapter and I enjoyed reading it a lot, I can't wait for the next! Marvelous work.
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan on July 19, 2004
    Such a sexy chapter, literally!

    I'm really curious as to what Zaizen and Touko are planning, they're so conniving and it's not fair to Robin to be betrayed by something like that. I'm so happy to see Michael defend Amon when it came down to it, even thought he had a niggling bit of doubt bite at him because of the possibility.

    I loved the lemon. The scenes between them were sweet and the way Amon wanted to make this special and memorable, it was just a really warm feeling that bloomed in me when I read. Normally sex is hot and over and done with like a snap of the fingers, but scenes like this, _sex_ like this turns out to be hot on an all new level and even more enjoyable, loving. I was grinning when I found out about the whole revenge on the parents and then sleeping in Zaizen's suite. *laughs* How fitting.

    What an amazing chapter and I can't wait to see what's in store with the two of them. :)
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  • From ANON - sierraviridian on July 16, 2004
    Yes, I can see why keeping his name would be distracting. XD Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan on July 08, 2004
    Oh, in that case, lol, Isticstick with this one. :P But I'm sure your non-yaoi fic will be just as good!

    I'm glad I got to read this, at first, I thought aff.net was going to have another break down and I'd have to go through a withdrawl or something. But I'm sliding off topic -- I would like to say that this fic is great. I love how you captured Michael and Amon's relationship and how they share this certain understanding with each other, the chemistry emitting from the writing is amazing.

    My eyes teared up when I read Michael trying to explain his dream and how it involved Amon -- I'm glad they're "together" now. I have to say I'm greatly amused by Michael's gung-ho attitude about shacking it up (lol, sorry for the flat expression) -- it's just like a teenager to want to experiment and gain some know-how in this type of things. I'm cheering for them both and I can't wait till that lemon stuff comes up. ;)

    But now I'm also interested in the whole Robin-Touko thing. Hm, somehow I kind of think it might involve Zaizen, but it's too early to say now. All I know is that she's being very shady!

    Can't wait for more! This is going great.
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan on June 14, 2004
    *sniffles* Chapter five and six sealed the deal for me. The start and close to the end of six made me start to cry. I don't get how some parents (even if it was a dream) could be so damned mean to their child they consumated for god's sake (no pun ndednded) just because they prefer something "from the norm." It's not right. I felt so bad for Michael in his dream(...?).

    I'm glad him and Amon finally had a talk, I especially like it how both of them connect so well and Michael is able to point out certain things Amon does, like about the cookies and such. It's really nice to have someone like that who can did deep within you and understand each other.

    I wonder what's going to happen now though.

    I read you branched off from the one on ff.net -- what changes specificallI maI may be interested in reading both, no matter how weird thaundsunds. :P
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  • From ANON - T-Cat on June 10, 2004
    Sorry, no e-mail, live in a house that was wired in the dark ages. Good story so far, and who said you can't have at least two story lines running at the same time. The ones in my head sometimes run three or four. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Chibi-chan on May 19, 2004
    *grins* Yeah, two plots makesrythrything a hell of a lot more interesting in terms of drama and all that cool shit that can happen. I can't wait to see what happens later on with Touko and how she copes, along with Robin, too. And Amon sure is just taking everything in and waiting for it reach a certain breaking point so he can raise a holy hell...while Michael sits and waits while Sakaki gets to listen in on everything. :p

    I can't wait for more and what's going to happen. Everything is all up in the air and anything and everything is pretty possible. :) You're doing a wonderful job and I think have captured everyone of the characters perfectly.
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