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Reviews for From the Memoirs of a Moth

By : Megumegu
  • From Chichiriskoi on April 10, 2007
    nice job, really intense and beautifully done. ^^
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  • From Tamura on January 25, 2005
    that was gorgeous. i admit i haven't seen the whole series, but i've read a lot about it as well... now that i look at it closely, Hartia really is very much a moth to Kry's flame... write more fics like this- onegai. *bows*
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  • From ANON - Silverr on December 19, 2004
    Woo- hoo~!

    de-lish-us~!
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  • From ANON - shinimitsukai on November 27, 2004
    Yes, yes, yes! Excellent introspective into Hartia and Krylancelo's past relationship. Hartia's amazingly in-character, and I could almost taste his wistful longing for his best friend. The portrayal of Azalie's 'monopoly' on Krylancelo's time and affections fits well into the canon and Orphen's relentless search for her in the first series. Of course, smut is always a plus.

    I would go back and check how you uploaded this, however. The closing quotation marks show up as an undefinable character and there are several repeated words or extra characters. It detracts from the story and demoralizes you as a writer. Grammar is fine, as is most of the spelling. You obviously know what you're doing. I hope to see more of your work in the future.

    -Shinimitsukai
    shinimitsukai@charter.net
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  • From ANON - Level4Chaos on October 23, 2004
    Absolutely beautiful! Your words flow so perfectly, and create an amazing picture. I could see it and feel it so clearly, it was if I was there. Wonderful stuff! Well done! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Eridel on May 25, 2004
    Wow.......amazing! Really! I love this...not only for the yaoi goodness, but your desriptions are absolutely beautiful! You have incredible talent!
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  • From ANON - amir ...XD on May 16, 2004
    XD I dont think the last one came out... It was basically as follows:

    You're writing all of my scripts for me from now on... *prepares large carpet bag* *clears room in closet*

    One thing, though: The formatting on the ending quotation mark comes out as a capital E on my computer... I dont know why...
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  • From ANON - amir ...XD on May 16, 2004
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