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Reviews for Parallel Lines

By : Lexie
  • From ANON - girl from ipanema on October 28, 2004
    I just love the action scenes between Misao and Aoshi. These were wonderfull. There will be lovely lemons for all of them, right, right?
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  • From ANON - Kallipygia on October 28, 2004
    WOOHOO! I go offline for a week to move and what do I find when I get connected again? ANOTHER CHAPTER -- YAY!!! Looking forward to seeing Aoshi and Misao resolve their relationship, among other things. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on October 27, 2004
    Lexie-love,

    this is just getting so intense. i can't wait to see what happens next.

    tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - Chokoreeto Ame on October 25, 2004
    This is an amzing fanfic! I was hoping for more lemons, but it is sooo good that I"ll read it either way. You have alot of talent and pay attention to details, though you seem to slack off in certain chapters. Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon!
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  • From ANON - J on October 23, 2004
    hmm...update!!!!!!! this story is one of the best stories ever!!!! altho there were some typo's like this one: "Misao let our a low whistle" isnt it supposed to be misao let out a low whistle???? o well this story is very imaginative eatieative. Please write more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Birdy06 on October 14, 2004
    Oh!That was such a great chpt!Please,please,please update soon.Arigatou!
    JA NE!
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on October 13, 2004
    YAY, you updated! Just what I need to combat my mid-moving depression. Great climax, I can hardly wait to see how you're going to resolve it! :)
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lady Lime on October 13, 2004
    Oh la la! Shishio and Kenshin battle royal...ho hum...Well alls well that ends well.. It is going to end well isn't it?
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on September 15, 2004
    Woooot update
    lol thanks i love this story
    such good writing
    well anywho cant wait for the next one

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  • From ANON - Birdy06 on September 13, 2004
    Please,please,please update as soon as possible. Arigatou! JA NE!
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on September 13, 2004
    I like lemons, but don't feel like you need to sacrifice your story to squeeze them in -- this is a great adventure, and I'm enjoying seeing everying in action in their AU personas. Also can't wait to find out who the Mole is! :eep eep up the good work...
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on September 09, 2004
    And I thought my cliffies were bad....... this one has mine beat all to poop.
    The greatness of this tale almost makes the wait for AFF to get its butt back on track worth it.
    Outstanding!

    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - Lexie on September 02, 2004
    Hi Lime, I know--the lemons haven't really been there, but somehow it didn't seem quite right... You should always wait til it feels right, heh heh! So no real hot and heavy between K&K yet, but do stress the YET--there will have to be some juicy waffy lemons before the story is done :)
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on September 02, 2004
    You're doing a wonderful job with this fic! The developing relationship between Sano and Megumi is very sweet, and the sexual tension between Aoshi and Misao is a nice balance.
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lime on September 02, 2004
    OMG....Man...15 chapters and still all we have is a Kenshin/Megumi lemon... a Sano/ Megumi..eh limeishness AND well it would seem to me that Megumi is getting all the action here WITH all the cute guys no less. well except Aoshi and for love of ...please no Megumi and Aoshi~whatever as I am POSTIVE you won't do that.

    okay so that is just the lemon~head side of me complaining.

    I still love the fic story line and characters... just a little more of a lemon~head than I thought I was...
    Ah and I as well as others seemed to have totally missed what ever it was that thing you gave away or messed up. See what good attentive readers we are!! O.Ox Those of us who caught it will surely kick ourselves later on.

    SEMI-patiently I wait for the next chappie... since this chappie is sending Kenshin away is this ONE night going to last like 3 chapters? So that we don;t get K/K till like chapter 23? :( I don't want the story to end but...

    Oh well what ever you decided to do will be fine with me.

    De Lazy Lime
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