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Reviews for Parallel Lines

By : Lexie
  • From ANON - Raven Lace on June 06, 2004
    Ooooooooooooooh!!!!!! maybe kenshin and kaoru will finally get together...love the new chap...
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on June 06, 2004
    gahhh!! i'm serious!! put this on ff.net!!
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  • From ANON - girl from ipanema on June 06, 2004
    Thank you for updating often. It is going quite well. I hope you start some serious emotional romancing soon. And as for being similar to Broken Pieces, don't feel bad. Every single fantasie book out there is a spinoff from the Lord of the Rings: A gang of friends that is going to assail an evil being holed up in a mountain. From the Fionavar trilogy from Guy Gavriel Kay (which I love) to the books of David Eddings (which I find funny but rather uninspired). And of course the epic from Robert Jordan. You have plenty of good company!
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on June 05, 2004
    Once again, Lexi-sama you have written a good chapter, keep it up and am awaiting more updates. Arigatou for great stories
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on June 05, 2004
    And the plot thickens! Who's the mole? You're doing a great job with this story, keeping things moving, and your action scenes are well-done.
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  • From ANON - >:( on June 05, 2004
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on June 01, 2004
    Ok... I am now in a state of giggles. That was excellent. Poor Kaoru... but what a shock for Kenshin. Breakfast to go. Good thing there was no hot coffee on that tray. YEEOUCH!!
    As for Aoshi and Misao... interesting if not a little disconcerting. There is obviously a 'traitor' inside the organization who 'helped' Aoshi retrieve his gun... and he is non to concerned about using Miss Misao to get his wounded ass out of there. But it did appear he was a tad shocked by 'the kiss' they shared. Me thinks he may just end up taking her with him as an 'insurance policy'. Hmmmm... I like this. And I don't think its getting out of control. Its moving well. Very well indeed.
    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - kyut_tenshi on May 31, 2004
    Hey hey hey! Another great chappie! Why oh why do you always have to keep me in suspense? Oh the agony...

    Anyways, good luck on the next chapter! Sorry this review has to be a bit shorter... but anyway, still a review!

    ^-^ Ja!
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  • From ANON - Clemen on May 31, 2004
    Great fic. I really love how you write. I like your idea. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Until next then, take care.
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  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on May 30, 2004
    gahh!! you updated!! yay!! i seriously think that you should put this up on ff.net because its too good to only have adultfanfic readers know about it!! update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Oyuki on May 29, 2004
    you know, it's never good when someone says "we have a situation" especially in kenshin and sano's lineo f work. hehe. anyway, please, please have more soon! i'm really liking your story!
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  • From ANON - Piper on May 29, 2004
    Did Aoshi take Misao with him?
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  • From ANON - Sosoru (When am I logged in? Oh yeah, to update) on May 29, 2004
    I likey ficcy! I likey Ficcy!
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on May 29, 2004
    WOOHOO -- another chapter! Misao shooting Aoshi, Aoshi kidnapping Misao, Kaoru dumping breakfast on Kenshin, Sano flirting like crazy. Gotta love it! And who's the mole that slipped Aoshi his gun? (Hey, when does Saitou show up?)
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on May 26, 2004
    Keep up the great work.... can't wait for the next chapter.... I wonder what Kaoru is going to say and do.



    *^*^*^*^Kaoru-chan/BabyKaoru-sama/ChibiKaoru*^*^*^
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