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Reviews for Parallel Lines

By : Lexie
  • From ANON - MZ.AMbER EYES on May 19, 2004
    i loved it!! but ya know... k&k isnt going too fast to me, but if your going to make this realistic, he wouldnt fall love at first site ^____^ update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on May 19, 2004
    I like this... an interesting perspective to look at Kenshin's life from... and an interesting way to bring Kaoru into it. I will be quite intrigued to see where all of this is going to go, and I have perfect faith in you to pull it off. Very well done.
    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on May 18, 2004
    Yes a new chapter *dances for joy* ...... Can't wait for the next one ^^x




    (^^*^ KaorKaoru-sama/Kaoru-chan/ChibiKaoru^*^^)
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on May 17, 2004
    YEAH, Kenshin broke up with Megumi, still could not see that relationship, bleah. Keep it up lexie-san.
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  • From ANON - crAzibuNNi on May 11, 2004
    omg!! *falls out of chair leg twis*
    s*
    that was freakin amazing!!!!! i loveeeee au fics please please update soon
    *holds up cookie as bribe*
    ^_^
    Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on May 11, 2004
    I think you are doing a GREAT job for your first epic. Things are moving very smoothly and evenly. Your descriptions and emotiore qre quite believable and your characters are well defined. Keep it up girly... I believe you can go the distance.
    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - yue on May 11, 2004
    ohhh. i like this. its interesting. so far i think its very well written and the scenes just flow. well i hope u update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sosoru (not logged in) on May 09, 2004
    Very good for the most part. I only had a problem with one word:

    "Cock"

    I simply detest that slang term for "penis", LOL. But other than that, it's very interesting. I will be checking for updates.
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  • From ANON - peppercorn on May 09, 2004
    Hey good story. I'm a die-hard K&K person, but I'd much rather if Megumi and Kenshin's relationship didn't end because of Kaoru getting between them - like, let it end naturally, know what I mean? Things like that happen all the time, like it was good while it lasted but you get bored with each other after a while, drift apart movemove on to other people without losing affection as friends or being all "I h8 u". And I never liked the "Megumi's a total skank-ho bitch" fics. ;) Loved it so far!
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on May 09, 2004
    This is a great story, well-written, with good characterization. The reversal of having Yahiko think Kaoru is beautiful -- delightful! And the banter between Yahiko and Sano as Sano explains how "girl years" work was hilarious. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Mimi on May 09, 2004
    Yo! More PLZ! I like it so far! Poor megitsune she's going to be out of a sleeping partner and one hell of a Jealous bitch I assume.. ne way look'n forward to what ever is next!

    Ja ne!

    ~*Peace*~

    Mimi
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  • From ANON - Froggy on May 09, 2004
    Hey, if Kaoru started going with Sano, then Megumi could get jealous too, then her and Kenshin would be trying to get both Sano and Kaoru!
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  • From ANON - Froggy on May 09, 2004
    I really like this fic. More!
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  • From ANON - Piper on May 09, 2004
    I really like this fic. More!
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  • From ANON - KAoru-chan on May 09, 2004
    ooooooooooooo yea ... that was a great chapter up until I got to Megumi and Kenshin F*kin each other.... demo .... at the end I was laughing my head off... poor Kenshin is Jealous over little Kaoru... ^^x I wonder who Kaoru is going to be with eh??? Yahiko.... Sano..... or may be even Kenshin o^ ^o Tee Hee Hee .......



    ~*~**~*~*Kaoru-chan/ChibiKaoru~*~*~**~*~*~

    * Sometimes the right thing should always be the thing that people should honor*


    ^^x........ Kenshin

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