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Reviews for Tohma's Birthday

By : Chirella
  • From ANON - Mistr3ssQuickly on July 17, 2006
    Hmm, I should've left you a comment on this before, because really, it's the best Gravi fiction I've ever found. Unusual, as you said in your author notes, that it's heterosexual sex, but it's just beautiful, a lovely study of these two characters.

    The best part, for me, is the maro-polo game they play at the beginning, then again at the middle, and the confession that none of the "presents" has ever stayed the night. A good fic about how good it can be to have sex with your spouse, not just seeking the thrill of a stranger.

    Great fic, dear. I really enjoyed reading it!

    ~MQ
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  • From ANON - Dice on November 06, 2005
    Miaka!

    Tamahome!

    MIAKA!!

    TAMAHOME!!

    MIIIIAAAKAAA!!!

    TAMAAAAHOOOMEEE!!!

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  • From ANON - InuMiko on April 29, 2005
    That is sweet... I always thought that although Tohma loved Eiri, it was more of a brother/brother type love. Mika did not come across as the type of woman who would marry a man who had the hots for her brother instead, so it is refreshing to see a fanfic written about this couple :)

    Thank you for this!
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  • From Arii on March 28, 2005
    So sweet! ^_^
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on March 09, 2005
    Absolutely loved it!
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  • From ANON - Zerianyu on March 09, 2005
    Hey

    Odd, but welcomed. It was weat too I'm even crying it was good.
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on January 12, 2005
    Awe, that was sooo incredibly schweet! ^__^ I liked it very much!
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  • From ANON - Kei_Chan on December 30, 2004
    edited! yay! To bad tohma couldn't have lied about not sleeping with any of the 'Eiris...it owuld make for a nice story....'
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  • From ANON - Chirella on December 29, 2004
    Kei_Chan, the errors were actually a system/site glitch. I fixed it so it is back to how it looked when I originally posted it, thanks for pointing it out, I never would have noticed since I wrote/posted the story awhile ago.
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  • From ANON - Charlottlette on May 16, 2004
    Ok this is the first time I've ever left a review on this site so I hope you get it. I am an aspiring fanfiction writer myself and I have never seen this pairing in a Gravitation ficcie! Kudos to you for writing a sweet romantic Touma-Mika story without making it dirrty or sad. I'm sure Mirakami-san would be honored with your potrayal of her sweet couple!
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on May 10, 2004
    AWWWWWWWWWW!!! That was so sweet. I loved that. Thanks for the great fic. ^____^ I hope to read more soon.
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  • From PatoSan on May 10, 2004
    Well, surprisingly enough, I liked that a lot (and I never read het...) It's because I really like Tohma as a character and even though I've avoided fics with Mika I've somehow grown used to the idea. I thought the whole gift idea was rather clever, I really did like it. Well done.
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  • From Silverone on May 10, 2004
    Awww, that was so sweet. It made me all warm and squishy inside. I thought it was going to be really sad at first, then it was happy. Horaay for Mika!
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