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Reviews for True path

By : hentaipie
  • From sharinganblade on July 30, 2007
    keep it up ur awesome!!!!!!!! : )
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  • From Scorpinac on July 09, 2007
    An interesting beginning, it'll be interesting to see where you're going, spelling and grammar errors aside. Laters.
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  • From ANON - stacey on July 04, 2006
    i like where its going, great story, good plot, and great at adding new deminsions to always changing characters. PLEASE WRITE MORE I BEG YOU, I'M ADDICTED!
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  • From ANON - Greaterbeast_xellas on June 23, 2006
    UPDATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - ailish on October 11, 2005
    it is very funny. i want to know what Ukyo is up to?? anyway you should keep going. this is a great story.
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  • From hentaipie on August 02, 2005
    Awwwwwwww.... thanks for saying my fanfic sucks, sadly I was a beginner in 8th grade when I first began to pursue a writer's path. so I guess that means I'm just not meant to write and I should give it up? or is it that I only suck at writing fanfiction, if you are saying that then I'd gladly give up fanfiction for good. I'm sorry but I don't need you to tell me it sucked, I need you to tell me why it sucked, it's called constructive Criticism.
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  • From ANON - imak iatneh on July 18, 2005
    hehehehe...excellent....for a shitty beginner...sorry for the harshness...if u bite me....welll i will like it...so...do what u want my opinion is out
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  • From on June 06, 2005
    i THINK ITS PRETTY GOOD. KEEP WRITING KIE-CHAN!!! *GLOMP* mine!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 31, 2005
    nice twist. you should do mroe chapters on it. i want to see what akane does adn what ukyo is planning
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  • From ANON - EvilP on May 27, 2005
    OK story, quite OOC however and the actual Ranma influence is a bit weak.
    Your biggest problem is that you're not cutting up the story into readable paragraphs! It's made from large blocks of text! You'll have to figure out when there is a shift in perspective so you can partition the text into bits. Dialogue is generally good for noticing when to split it up.
    Remember to tell a STORY too, conflicts, tension and that kinda stuff.
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  • From ANON - rothos1 on May 23, 2005
    Good story and nice cliffhanger, Although I thought that Shampoo or Cologne would get involved. Keep writing Bravo!!
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  • From ANON - S.M. on July 15, 2004
    can't wait for more
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  • From oldwolf on June 05, 2004
    2nd chapter wasn't too bad. The story has potential. So long as the story-line is too transparent, it should be excellent.
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  • From BrianChattillon on June 05, 2004
    Hm, Interesting slow start indeed, I wait to see Uky Ukyo is planning , I know it has been 5 years later and stuff, but Remember Akane is VERY jelous and stuff , so her dramatic change indeed so far is somewhat interesting, ranma's too he would never hurt a freind's feelings so how this plays out, is somewhat up in the air, and there is still the Ryouga situation to deal with !
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  • From ANON - hentiafluffy on May 22, 2004
    it was pretty good but you need to update ok :D
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