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Reviews for Uncontrolled Passions

By : lighthawkdemon
  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2004
    GREAT STORY YOU SHOULD UPDATE
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  • From ANON - eviljedijackson on July 11, 2004
    hey now, don't worry about writing full-blown lemons. They're just as good as any other type of writing, it all depends on the author, and with the way you've been writing this one, I'd ave to say you're doing very well, and if you make it a lemon, it will only be better.
    ciao
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  • From ANON - no one in particular on July 04, 2004
    Hey i like the story so far and ill have to agree with you that you might have to go into a full blown lemon at this rate but nonetheless its still a really good story keep up the good work and update soon please
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  • From migele on June 04, 2004
    that is great
    motoko and kei are the best hina pairing!
    but still your Story is quite screwed up.
    Hell how will they get out of that?
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  • From ANON - JPElles on June 02, 2004
    Great story, never liked Naru. Reminds me too much of Akane from Ranma 1/2,
    and some girls I know personally i.e. runs hot and cold all the time, really bitchy. Keep up the good writing. I wouldn't mind seeing a storyr with Kietaro, and Kitsune, although I agree that Motoko is probably the best girl for him from the series.
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