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Reviews for Uncontrolled Passions

By : lighthawkdemon
  • From Dansama92 on February 02, 2013
    Ok are you ever going to update this story?
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  • From ANON - Ruto Kuntai on December 21, 2006
    I really liked the story, man Keitaro sure is a lucky man.
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  • From ANON - redwyrm on December 05, 2006

    Why The fuck have you not update this great story!
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  • From ANON - Bruce on September 11, 2006
    Wow!!! The drama, the love-triangles squared, the everyting, especially the sex!!! Damn, I always thought that Keitaro was better off with Motoko. I don't know why, it just seemed that these two, despite how their relationship began when the manga first started, it just felt right. Too bad it didn't end that way in manga, or the anime, but in your little fanfic world, it has and I'm glad I discovered and read it. I do hope you'll continue with this because it is a very well written and intriguing story, and I'd love to read more. Will this be just a Keitaro/Motoko fic, or will it be a Keitaro/Harem fic, I wonder? However, if it does turn out that way, then allow Motoko to be his #1, because shde deserves it, or at the very least let it be just those two together.
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on July 18, 2006
    I enojy the plot alot. and even tho there a good bit of lemony scenes it has a classy feel to it and very enjoyable to read :) looking forward to the next to update!
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  • From Hudson on February 06, 2006
    You know. You could Give Shinobu some "LOVE" time with keitaro too you know, instead of giving her that small part in Chapter 6. How about huh? Please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    Best ever
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    Best ever
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  • From ANON - .... on December 20, 2005
    heh...hehehe...he...
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  • From ANON - MitoFreak on December 12, 2005
    You've taken the Naru bashing a bit far by having Kanako violently attack her while she's in bed. The playful mishaps/antics that Akamatsu described (Naru Punching an immortal keitaro to hide the fact that she likes him) haved been changed into something a lot more disturbing and deranged. The rest of the hinata crew (especially Keitaro) would forcibly remove Kanako after doing something that violent and criminal.
    Maybe its time for a little therapy.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2005
    Possibly the best Motoko-Keitaro fic ever
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  • From ANON - Great Pervert on November 25, 2005
    Dis fic is awesome but as a pervert i must say u shuld put some oral for Keitaro and put some anal plz n more sex scenes with KANAKO!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Great Pervert on November 25, 2005
    Dis fic is awesome but as a pervert i must say u shuld put some oral for Keitaro and put some anal plz n more sex scenes with KANAKO!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Church on November 24, 2005
    DUDE YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! FUCK YES!!! so wen does kanako get with keitaro agn?

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  • From ANON - fic fan on November 24, 2005
    wonderful and story so far looking forward to the next chapter
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