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Reviews for Sagara's Deflowering

By : Lexie
  • From ANON - Karen on August 19, 2004
    WHOOOOO!!!! THAT was great...^^juuuuuust exellent..I just LOVE Kurz!! so damn hot...anyways...cant wait for that next chappie!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Elvy on July 21, 2004
    Wow! I was worried that there was only one Sousuke x Chidori fanfic for the Full Metal Panic section, but after reading that, I was pleasantly surprised! Obviously in this series (especially with Sousuke's complete lack of primal instinct) you really had to do a bit of character stretching to get them into bed. Which, unfortunately, puts Chidori in the position of being the aggressor. While I don't see her going this far to get with him (because she's in denial as well), her personality makes her the more obvious candidate for making the first move. We all know that Ske'ke's the last person who'd ever act on a sexual impulse (if it ever even comes to his mind at all). However, I can totally forgive it because of the way you set it up and followed through. You still maintained quite a bit of their personas and didn't sacrifice the wonderful plethora of jokes and devilish schemes. I totally appreciate the very end when Melissa wants to scout out Kurz due to eavesdropping. That was classic! I gave this fanfic 5 stars because it was good, you maintained character persona to the best of your ability given the situation, and you did a wonderful job communicating the story (aka, spelling, grammar, and utilizing a diverse vocabulary without raping the thesaurus in the process). Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - Hey! on July 16, 2004
    Great story. You write really well! I'd like to see a Kurz/Melissa. Please? ^-^
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  • From ANON - Jasmin on July 10, 2004
    It was really good one of the best Lemon stories I've ever read

    Ond, nd, Umm, By the way, I would love to see a Melissa and Kurz Lemon

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  • From ANON - NUNI on June 28, 2004
    ^-^ I really liked this fic. It was about time somebody wrote a FMP fic on this site. I liked it, please keep writing I would like to see some more of your ideas.
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  • From ANON - Gord on June 25, 2004
    I wouldn't mind a Sousuke/Tessa chapter instead of the Melissa/Kurz one ;D
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  • From ANON - HILLARY on June 24, 2004
    OOO THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PUT ANOTHER S/K
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  • From ANON - Javu on June 19, 2004
    This is great! Are you going to updaton? on? Because i can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Lagra on June 17, 2004
    Just one word: Awesome, i truly want to read more and soon i hope!
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  • From Zelix on June 16, 2004
    I love it, man, this is the first FMP fic i've ever read and i love it! You're just so good, i love your fics! I haven't read them all yet but i wiventventually.
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  • From ANON - ShadoE on June 07, 2004
    I've really enjoyed your storie so far, you've kept the chacters pretty in character and I couyld see Kaname as the aggresor in this sort of encounter considering Sousuke somewhat indifference in other "romantic" situations in the series keep it going good stuff
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  • From TimeBat on June 07, 2004
    This is shaping up to be an excellent story, I've been waiting for a FMP lemon for ages, ever since I started watching the series. Very well written, and I love the teasing Kaname, to me it seems like the sort of thing she'd love to do to Sousuke if she was in the mood.

    Please write the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - megan on June 06, 2004
    finally a fmp lemon fanfic! I love the story, although kaname is a little out of character... I can't really ever...see her acting like that, but o well keep up the good work, hope to see more soon!
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on June 06, 2004
    This is an interesting take on the perspective within the series. I particularly liked the fact that Sousuke isn't the 'clueless military buff' he is so often portrayed to be. It will be interesting to see what happens next...poor Sousuke's in a bind isn't he?
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