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Reviews for Unforgettable

By : cyberdemon
  • From Lunchbox on September 28, 2007
    good stuff, please update!
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  • From ANON - dher123 on May 03, 2005
    Not much to say but NICE JOB!!! I really enjoyed reading it. The only thing I want to point out is on Chapter 16, I think you put in a wrong name. It read "Kagome" and I think you intended to put "Fiona." Other than that, your work is awesome! Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Chrono on May 02, 2005
    Ok, I'va said this before, and I'll say it again. I love this story. I do have some slight complaints though. You're making them sound a little too proper. I mean honestly, people don't talk like that in real life, and they definately didn't in the Zoids anime, even if this is an A/U. Try using things like You'll and aren't instead of you will and are not. It makes things sound a lot more realistic. One more thing. There was a part in the chapter called Fiona's Pain where you called her Kagome instead of Fiona. x________x Yeah, go fix that. But other than that, I've got no real gripes about this story. I've got it bookmarked, and I check it everyday to see if you updated. Keep writing, k?
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  • From ANON - DarkMetalAngel of Destruction on May 01, 2005
    Yay another good chapter. update as soon as you can. l8r
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  • From ANON - DarkMetalAngel of Destruction on April 27, 2005
    sweet, but i wish fiona's mom got a good ass kicking. awwww poor irvine. guess moonbay is pregnant. well update soon.l8r
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  • From ANON - DarkMetalAngel of Destruction on April 27, 2005
    Yay. u updated. 2 chapters!!! glomps u. me happy. i luv all your chapters. they're very good. well gtg now. l8r
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  • From ANON - Blarghish on February 21, 2005
    great story keeps a good flow and i really wanna read the rest
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  • From ANON - DarkMetalAngel of Destruction on February 09, 2005
    Great chapter. As always. hope u update soon and more van/fiona fluff n lemons. gtg now. ttyl. l8r
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  • From ANON - Chrono on February 08, 2005
    Wow!! I thought that this story was over after that night club thing, but I was reaaly happy when I saw that you made an update!! This is one of my favorite stories on this site, and one of the first that I bookmarked. Please add more!!

    P.S.
    -If you ever need someone to proof read new chapters or something, then please feel free to email me sometime!!
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  • From ANON - Irpotterhead on January 19, 2005
    This story ROCKS!! I cannot wait for the next chapter to come out!! Keep doing what you're doing because it is AWESOME!!
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  • From ANON - Leon on January 14, 2005
    Great chapter. Took you long enough to update it. I enjoyed every bit of it including the lemon. hope you update soon. well gtg now. l8r
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  • From Mic123 on November 27, 2004
    Very well done, exelent, bravo!!!! I think I began reading this fic at fanfiction.net and finished it here, lol a cuincidince mabey? well very good, need another chapter or a sequil New Beginins or somthing lol, A 10 Mill stars, A+ 50 wise story, very good and discritive, exelrnt plot that keeps you entertaind, need more ASAP ok?
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  • From ANON - DarkMetalAngel of Destruction on November 15, 2004
    Very good Van/Fiona fanfic. was glad u updated a lot. i enjoy all your chp in this story. it was very intense, but enjoyed it very well. reminds me of my true love who left me, but I know she'll come back because I found her again and trying to bring her back. hope you update this fic as soon as possible. gtg now. l8r.
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