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Reviews for Gravity

By : Robofetus
  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2005
    I am so floaty. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - rebecca on July 27, 2005
    ^-^.^,^.^-^^.^-^.^ :)))))
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on July 27, 2005
    damn, i gotta say, one of THE BEST hng fics out there.... and especially of all the one shots i've read, you way outrank them all with this one i think... i love your writing, the bits of humor you threw in that were perfect for the situation, exactly something i could see the boys doing... and you have their chars down perfect! esp all the initial clumsiness, awkwardness, shyness, etc etc... anyway, so much i loved about this, but too tired to write a novel lol, so, a couple quotes i quoted to my girl houseki when i was raving about this to her:

    Hikaru was about to speak again, but paused. He studied the young man kneeling on the floor in front of him. It was very strange to see him from above. It looked like his hair was parted with a ruler.
    He decided that it probably was.

    that, i was totally rofling!! heheheh and then of course:

    Akira swallowed thickly. There was no wind left in him, and his vision was bleary. Dazed and out of breath, he tried speaking.
    "Can you see the phone? I mean, the fridge? I mean the clock."

    i just kept rereading that cuz it was too great, and every time i think i laughed more :p

    anyway, the only complaints i could possibly have were typos, (which sometimes i think aff's server is responsible for cuz they not only get pretty crazy, but are similar in many fics with how fucked up the typos are...) and that i really loved the slow pace, the gradual seamless transitions from one situation to the next, it all worked beautifully and i loved that you could start with hikaru hurting his foot like that and turn it into a chance for akira to get lost in caressing him... that was sweet dude... but once they were in the bedroom it was like "let's go!" but... ah well, in the heat of the moment it really can go that way too, so i'm still happy see? ^_________________^ anyway, my last complaint: you don't have anymore hng fics!!! you have a great amount of fics, and if they're all as well written and enjoyable as this was, i'm sure they're awesome, but damn the only other anime in your fics i know enough about are naruto and bleach *cries* and hikago fics are severly lacking, both in quantity and quality for the most part.... please write more!! whether it be adding to this, or something new altogether, please write more hng!! *ahem* ok, i'm done lol
    ~lg
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on January 21, 2005
    Yeah Hikaru really is a fast mover and just seems to non-chalant. I think such an attitude would hurt Akira's feelings.
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  • From ANON - Shinoga on January 09, 2005
    Holy hell..............wow........I mean that wow. This has got to be one of the best written yaoi sex scenes I have ever read. I think I'm blushing this was so sweet and yet full of honest desire.
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  • From ANON - miss catastrophe on December 09, 2004
    Oh, wow! Thank you! This story was wonderful. Your writing is simply delicious and the sex scene left me slightly breathless. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - Mitsuki on December 05, 2004
    One of the best fanfics I have ever read, definitely now one of my all time favorites. I love your style of writing, and the way those two just fit together, and come together in this story is really well done. It feels very natural and sweet, while at the same time managing being hot and sexy XD Don't have much to say other than that, but incredibly well done, I love it! Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Shez on December 04, 2004
    Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT! They were so in-character it was amazing! Sequel, please? *puppy eyes*
    ~Shez
    http://boy-toys.totallychibi.com
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  • From ANON - Shorty* on November 09, 2004
    Wow, I loved it. It was just great. I loved the uncertainly/unsureness that they had. The tentativeness of it all was refreshing and it made it believeable as well. Also, that was definitely a unique way to get them started. Heh. I must say, I picked a well-written story to be my first Hikago fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - MoOdSwInG on September 21, 2004
    Ok, I have to say this! YOU are one of the greatest fiction writer I have ever seen (or read...mmmm). Your stories are perfect, I have nothing to argue about. ''Gravity'', as expected, is no exeption. Whaaaaa... I feel like a little highschool girl(I'm actually a 26 years old art teacher!). Sorry about all the squeeling, coudn't restrain myself ;)

    Anyways, thanks again for this beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - ani on September 11, 2004
    hmm... what to say.... kinda odd way of gng tng them together, hurting hikaru like that. but i must say, the sex scene was great.
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  • From ANON - Klepto on June 24, 2004
    That's definitely the first time I saw a first time fic starting off when someone getting their foot patched up. XD
    It was pretty well written. I liked it.

    =^_^=
    MEOW!

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  • From ANON - Supaa Saiyajin Trinity on June 23, 2004
    I really liked this. I guess it's realistic in the sense that they would react towards each other in this way after knowing and being around one anther for so long. But I have to admit, I don't think it ever occured to ANYOo uso use Neosporin as lube. Forgive me, but that one was just a little too much. ^^;
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  • From ANON - elihua on June 12, 2004
    I love the little lists of things they notice about eachother. They're funny and they show so well how close they've gotten. The little bits of humor through this whole thing are just wonderful. And how just cause they're meant to be together or whatever doesn't mean they know exactly what they're doing. Too often you see that! As if all the cute awkwardness were less yummy!

    Besides all the things that made me squeal and just made this fun to read, you seem like an awfully good writer. I don't really know how to say how since I'm certainly not one... That seems to deter both the figuring out what it is you're doing so right and in the telling... I dunno. Er. There was nothing awkward about the dialogue or how you phrased anything. It all worked perfectly. The mood of it all came out in every sentence. Er. *feels stupid*

    If I try and nitpick, just cause I feels silly sometimes to not have anything more than praise to say, I was a little surprised at Hikaru being sofidefident later on. Well, maybe it wasn't the confidence that surprised me but how easy-going he got after a while. He is like that sometimes, but this is a situation I'd have not thought him to act that way in... Though it *does* make Touya look all the more cute. Maybe it's just me being obsessed with how adorable they are fumbling around. Also, the ending felt a little fast compared to the rest. Lots of these stories end like that without being a problem, but this one just took things so *wonderfully* nice and slow that I kind of expected it to be a little... er... slower. Indeed.

    But thank you so much for such a wonderfully story! This has got to be one of the best HikaGo stories I've read. And I've read far too many. I don't usually review so much cause anything I can think to say always seems so vague, but nice writing like this deserves feedback, and the stuff on this site doesn't seem to get so much, and that d and an awful shame. Have you posted it anywhere else, cause it just plain deserves to be read, too. I'm sure the nice people at the hikagoyaoi board would love you forever and ever if you poseted it there. I really think this is one of the best!
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