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Reviews for Bubble Bath

By : rileycharlotte
  • From on March 09, 2007
    This is really good. A few minor grammatical and typographical errors but who cares? I love the metaphors, too, they're so creative. And I don't feel like either of them were really that OOC, but that might just be me. I like the ending too, so don't change it. Good job!
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  • From ANON - kut3_1 on September 20, 2006
    Awwwww! how CUTE! they make such the most adorable couple, like, ever!!! i loved your story, and i think the reanef character was just perfect. heh, heh, only raenef would write himself a reminder to confess his love...and i could so see that happening with Erutis. Overall, i think this was one of the cutest stories of Eclipse/Raenef!
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  • From ANON - shessyisafluffygod on December 24, 2005
    absolutely adorable
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  • From xXcrossXpunisherXx on November 09, 2005
    Dude...Your story F**king RULED! I
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  • From ANON - iie on July 26, 2005
    soap as lube??! O_o ow! Well, it's all good though...rae didn't seem to mind too much...or at all! ^^ That ending though was fine. I think it's even better that way, cuz unfortunate things like that always seem to interrupt the good stuff ne...well, i can imagine erutis doing something like that...::smirk::
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  • From ANON - Shadow on March 20, 2005
    I know I read something about an update....perhaps a sequal??? *pleading tone* And I must agree that bath's and naked demons make for a good lemon.....
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  • From ANON - Elyse on February 26, 2005
    Thank you for that delicious Raenef/Eclipse lemon!! Demon Diary fics are so rare ;_;.. Great authors like you is what this fandom needs! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Tendrilrake (Not lgd on) on December 14, 2004
    I didn't think it was pointless, I though tit was... cute!^-^ You're such a fantastic writer- they way you discribed everything was so new and so origianl. You were right when you said there aren't many fic's out there with Eclips/Raenef pairings- I'm glad you wrote one to add to the punny number, It made my night!
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  • From ANON - Kaye-chan on December 06, 2004
    I loved the story!! Pointless yaoi is always fun, but I could never actually see Eclipse calling Raenef "honey"...I dunno, it just doesn't seem to fit his personality. The rest of the story was cool though, so keep writing! ^o^ YAOI AHOY!!
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  • From YoakeRyuu on July 18, 2004
    *cheers* Hey, don't diss the ending; that was the kawaiiest ever! ...Kawaiiest? @_@ Hmm... Yummy ficcy... That was actually the first Demon Diary fic I've ever read! What a great way to start off ^_~
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  • From ANON - Liz B. on July 10, 2004
    Heh...I just realized I made a mistake and its not Demon Diaries and its Demon Diary....sorry......I don't think before I type usually.....just wanted to apologize for that....heh....but great job on the fic!!! It made me very happy! You still get the Demon DIARY, not Demon DIARIES Dance Party!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Liz B. on July 10, 2004
    OH MY GOD!!!! THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!! YOU ARE SO GOOD!!! YOU TOOK ALL OF THE ELEMENTS I LOVE ABOUT DEMON DIARIES AND PUT THEM INTO A PERFECT LEMON ONE SHOT!!!!!! YOU ARE AN ANGEL!!!!!! This was so sweet and cute and at the same time a very hot fic!!!! great job!!!! YOU ARE WONDERFUL!!!! Keep up the good work!!!! It was so great!!! And, for the record, you did a great job even if you were a mindless, caffine-deprived author and believe me, I know what being caffine depirved is like....not fun!!! GREAT WORK!!!! *confetti falls from the sky and a huge cake comes out on a cart that says "Great Job On Bubble Bath!!!" with a graphic Raenef and Ecilipse scene on it as strobe lights go on and its a great Demon Diary dance pawithwith an ice scultpure also of Reanef and Eclipse doing naughty things*
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  • From ANON - Kaida-little dragon on July 02, 2004
    i like it! It's upsetting how little R/E lemons there are. The end was good. I found it funny she found them together. Well, bye!
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  • From ANON - yokaze on June 28, 2004
    water scenes are fun! bubbles too! ^,^ . . . *sigh* i need to get a life . . .
    NEway, i love this fic even though it started off in a bit of a rocky start, but it got much better afterwords
    ^,^
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  • From ANON - Naria lacour de Fanel on June 27, 2004
    -_- -_- I want a bath now.....with bubbles....and naked demons...ok, well maybe I'd like to walk in on naked bishie demons in a bubble bath doing unspeakable things to each other....maybe even bishie Sohmas*faint*


    Yesh, I'm an author, I've reviewed a story or two of yours before!! ^_^ I was just too lazy to log in today...meh...

    Good sweet lemon...kinda an oxymoron, but it was gooooooooooooood... (just throw Aya in there!!)*evil cackle*
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