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Reviews for Mind Games and Coffee

By : Solaras
  • From ANON - eMu3 on January 06, 2007
    does that mean you're going to bring in the weisslings? that would be fun...i mean, i'm not dumb (not completely anyway) i know that was a reference to the magnificently beautiful death of the whiny purple thing known as ouka, but one can hope the main characters of the fandom could make a cameo...
    seems like crawford's had a developmental change in attitude...maybe a chapter from his perspective would help explain things...?
    by the by, i know that if this conversation had transpired with the schuldig i've developed in my own fan fiction, then the line about takatori hurting schu would have scared the shit out of him based on that earlier chappie where takatori was lusting after him. he'd have been scared crawford was planning on getting him raped or something, not exactly visions of golf clubs. so anyway, yeah. just something to throw out there.
    okay, thankee for the added chappies and please keep going!
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  • From ANON - eMu3 on January 06, 2007
    ooo, i liked that one. you work really well with farfarello. when you're done with this fic, you should do something focusing on him (i said when you're done, because you do not work at a fast enough pace to handle two stories at once without torturing your fan base [pointing a finger sternly]). very few authors seem to nail him, and the japanese people who created him certainly didn't develop him enough...or understand christianity and irish catholicism in particular enough to really figure him out. anyway, you write good dialogue for him and seem to get into his head rather well (however much of a compliment that can be, i mean it well) keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - eMu3 on January 06, 2007
    no, plot is a good thing. i can appreciate the slow route...haven't had me own computer in awhile so i've had to take a long break from ficcie, but on the plus side it means i apparently get to read a few new chapters all at once and you get a few new reviews all at once.
    actually, the epiphany thing worked nicely. i've felt that since schu is such a two dimensional uncaring asshole in canon, weiss fic where he gets romantically attached to someone instead of just physically (non PWPs, basically) are always a bit of a stretch, but the needing to feel real thing works nicely. i dunno, i thought this was a good chapter, and the fact that you are layering on plot is what makes this an interesting story that stands out in the sea of smut that is the weiss ficcie community.
    anywho, keep up the good work and i am on to the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Varen on November 25, 2006
    Keep it up! I don't want the one to die for another 6-10 monthes! It's really good! You've got the characters down pat, now keep it moving!
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  • From ANON - Bards Apprentice on November 24, 2006
    i'm abso-fucking-lutely in love with this story.
    i don't care how long it takes u to finish it, its on my favorites now. ^_^

    you're writing style is very professional. & i LOVE the Marlowe reference! XD
    i squee over Farfie too. u write him sooooo well -that's hard to do for many ppl.

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  • From ANON - Tsubaki on November 22, 2006
    Once again, another wonderful chapter! But it somehow feels I'm left to ponder with another cliffhanger. *twitch*
    Hope to see another update soon! Or I might just go mad.
    I'm always checking in every week as sad as that sounds. Haha.
    Update! Update! ^^''

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  • From Astrid on November 03, 2006
    Since my first review was only for chapter 1, here's more--lots of it. ^^

    ch.2-3:
    Haha, poor Crawford! Must be hard (no pun intended, lol) to have a half-naked telepath around when you're determined to not take note of him in a sexual way. *gg*
    Schuldig certainly is full of mischief. His meddlings in the elevator--priceless! ^^
    Großmutter, eh? She's a very kind woman and seems to care a great deal about Schuldig, that's too sweet! No doubt she'll keep trying to turn Schuldig into a sumo wrester, physically speaking. lol She's a very perceptive woman, too. Let's see if she'll manage to push Schuldig in the right direction as far as Crawford is concerned. *grins*

    ch.4-5:
    Takatori is such a leech! Bah! Brad should allow Schuldig to kill him. Anyhow, he *does* get protective where the telepath is concerned. Hah! I knew it! ^^
    Games with God? Just the perfect concept to keep Farfarello reigned in. ;)
    Oh, and may I add that you're mean? To get Schuldig all worked up, and then have Crawford dump his ass on the floor only because he got another couple of visions and remembers what he's got to do? Grmph! You didn't even allow Crawford to get some realease in the shower! *pouts*

    ch.6-8:
    “I said chip at the ice block, not go at it with a sledge hammer!” Sledge hammer indeed! *chuckles* Just what would Schuldig do without his Großmutter, I wonder? He sure needs someone to spell out his own feelings to him (not to mention those of Brad). Gotta love that "love handles" comment, too. ^^
    Schuldig's go at mission "watch Brad for signs of what Großmutter called affection" is true to the telepath's nature as I picture him. Irritates the shit out of Brad. Hehe.

    ch.9-11:
    Ah, Schuldig the tortured soul. Makes me want to hug him and never let go again.
    Farfarello's attack on Schuldig came as a bit of a surprise. Quite intense. Gave me the shivers. Farfarello really is crazy--the hunt on which he takes Schuldig is once again proof. Then again, he's ordering knifes on the homeshopping channel and is fully aware of return options, etc. Crazy, yes, but not dumb. I like that view of him. ;)
    Change of topic: would Schuldig and Brad figure out already what they mean to each other?! Aaargh! No, honestly, great bathroom scene there with the two of them. Some very sweet moments, the expected doubts, and the inevitable restoration of shields. I never expected it to be easy for them. ;)

    P.s.: Since you seemed in doubt: you used and translated the expression "Halt die Schnauze!" just fine. Should you ever need any advice on anything to do with German, don't hesitate to approach me. I'm a native speaker. ;)
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  • From Astrid on November 03, 2006
    LOL! What a fabulous start! Looks like it's not easy for one precognitive to get some peace and quiet around his team. ;) The part about Schuldig leaving his door open a crack was endearing, for lack of a better word. So Crawford merely sees the practicality behind it when he follows that example, because it helps Schuldig sleep better and consequently himself as well? Haha, something tells me that's not all there is to it. It might just take the precog a while to realise. ^^
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  • From ANON - throwerchick on October 30, 2006
    MORE!! MORE!!! MOOOOOORE!!! i'll say it again.. this story is spectacular and PERFECT. you have them characterized exactly like i picture them.. makes me feel so damn inferior writing, but i cant stop reading your stuff!! please.. please, please.. give me more!!
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  • From ANON - annime on October 29, 2006
    I am glad you updated! I was cheering Schu on as he was chipping at the ice in the bathroom. However, I am worried about Crawford's warning on Takatori. Schu has always trusted Brad to take care of him/protect him, so it'll be interesting to see how he reacts.
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  • From ANON - DakotaRei on October 29, 2006
    *wiggles with happiness* I was so excited that you had updated! Squee! I hope you update again soon, but if it takes a while its ok too. As long as you don't abandon it completely! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Random Loser on October 02, 2006
    Hooray! I was worried that you'd forgotten about the fic, but seeing the new chapters up just made my week. ;_; Excellent work, as always, and I hope to see more from you soon! =D
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  • From ANON - Schuldig on September 24, 2006
    Hello! I reviewed at the very beginnig an couple of times, but because I thought you weren't continuing this story, I left it. Glad to see your still at it. Watched all 5 DVD's of Weiß Kreuz and now I love Schu even more ^^ Hope to see you update soon, can't wait for more SchuxBrad!
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  • From ANON - Charis on September 15, 2006
    I love this story, I really hope you are planning on continuing it, cause I'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Annime on August 23, 2006
    To answer your question, I love long stories but only if they are updated often. If a writer thinks they may never finish a story, I'd rather have the short version.


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