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Reviews for Wake Me When Death Comes

By : animeyaoi
  • From ANON - Hong Mee on July 02, 2004
    I just couldn't stop crying. Out of all the death fics I read... this one was the most believeable. It really made you think that Ryo is dead. NO! HE CAN'T BE! *prays for a miracle*

    And as always you got the characters right on the money.

    Arggggg. I just can't get over the fact that you killed him! AHH! Poor Dee! i just want to hug him. :-(


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  • From ANON - Darcy on July 01, 2004
    Well you definately have my attention. I'm eagerly awaiting the next part. =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2004
    Oh no!!! Ryo is dead?! What will Dee do now?! Awaiting the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - raining_like_tears on July 01, 2004
    I like to see how you're going to get yourself out of this one! Portrait Without Sin was really unique and you had a way of wrenching out every tear drop there was, and you're giving us something that gonna cause more heartbreak?! And you're going to hit harder? I'm going to have to go out and buy a new pillow, and box of tissues!! You've got a great start of a story though, and I'm in anticipation of just what you will come up for this one. I'll be checking in.... *thumb up for good luck*
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  • From ANON - Forever_Fake on July 01, 2004
    "sniffle, sniffle* Thought your other story Portrait was difficult enough that you broke them up, but now... *bawling* You like making people suffer, don't you? If I can sit here and feel shocshock, I can just figure what Dee's going through! Great job for a beginning story. I'll be here waiting with tissues on hand!
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  • From ANON - myndi on July 01, 2004
    You are unbelievable! You had me sobbing my eyes out! You are just too much setting us down right in the middle of things that seem to grab us he the throat and choke us to death....! Okay.. is that enough drama? But really... this is a very hard hitting piece that you've captured well on emotions...again. Can't wait to read more when you do update, yet dreading it at the same time. Harsher/dark mode? Oh, God! *Burying me head* Well, bring it on... Have to take your chapters with a grain of salt and true grit, but somehow I don't think we'll be disappointed in your overall work... Hope to see something soon.
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  • From ANON - aspiker on July 01, 2004
    Hello -

    I think this 1st chapter is a good starter. I hope you decide to continue with it. The tightness of the writing and the emotions of Dee come through quite well.

    That there is more author's note and warnings to it than fiction worries me, though. Some people may only want to read pwp (porn with out plot) or lightly angsty situations. However, if with 1 warning (that shows on the top level of the FAKE list before the reader ever clicks on the story to read) that this particular piece of fiction is dark, folks decide to read and then get upset, it's their problem. Not yours.

    Again, I hope you decide to continue with this piece of fiction. It's off to a good start.




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  • From ANON - windsurfer on July 01, 2004
    Man, you rock with your angst! This is really great, very emotionally moving. The scene of Dee trying to help Ryo, was terrific. I could see him doing that very thing. I hope to see more of this story up soon. Yes, I'm into gut wrenching pain.... *sniffing back the tears already*
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on July 01, 2004
    OH GOD! YOU"RE GONNA KILL ME AGAIN!! Portrait wasn't enough anguish? Poor Dee, suffering again! You are just too cruel... but I love you for it. After reading your other story, I don't think I will be disappointed in you ideas with this one, which you already warned was going to be much darker. I have my tissues ready!! Please continue with it...
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