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Reviews for Quiet Kiss

By : yaoilovervixen
  • From ANON - Fear Is The Mind Killer on October 04, 2005
    Oh my... that almost made me cry. I have to admit that being a huge fan of Eiri Yuki I tend to get into his frame of mind reading somethings. And that just made me think of him, sitting all alone in his bedroom, watching Shuichi sleep. When he is sure the boy is really sleeping he leans over and kisses him softly before getting up and going to work.... because he is always working and rarely ever sleeping. Anyway... maybe I just think too much.

    Fear
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  • From ANON - PIKACHU GODDESS on May 15, 2005
    NICE! Very to the point.

    PIKACHU GODDESS
    (o';'o)
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  • From ANON - Maazka on March 30, 2005
    ooohhh!!! i like. its soo sweet and yuki like. it seems to me like somin he'd scribble down on a piece of scrap one night when Shu is watching tv and yuki is in the study and is stuck.
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  • From on September 10, 2004
    It was beautiful!!! So very tender!!!
    I LIKED IT!!!
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  • From ANON - ronin101 on September 04, 2004
    I liked it. Although, I would have to argue that Yuki only gives (up) a "quiet kiss" for his bf. ~_^
    Anyway, I am not sure why you were begging for a review exactly, but I did enjoy your poem! I thought it had to rhythm and flow. I like your word choice.
    If you hadn't mentioned that it was from Yuki's pt of view, I would have gotten that hint from the poem. Hm. I am not sure what you are looking for, but I hope it something like what you were looking for and that I have encouraged you to keep writing!
    ~Sara
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  • From ANON - Reyn on July 16, 2004
    aw! how kyoote! that really does get to the point though. good job!
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  • From ANON - Pandora on July 14, 2004
    Nice poem. Like you said, it's pretty short and to the point, and I think that it worked out pretty well that way. You should write some more poems from the perspectives of some other characters.

    Keep it up!
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