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Reviews for Warmth

By : Iapetus
  • From ANON - PrincessAres on April 01, 2005
    Ack! I can't believe I messed up the review! I was on Illianaka's page which listed Warmth as a reccommended, so this early in the morning, I screwed up. But but but - the fangirl in me pleads with you to write more. Please please please? I was serious about that suggestion though, Sanzo approaching Goku...
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  • From ANON - PrincessAres on April 01, 2005
    Hey! I've read all your Saiyuki fics on AFF.net and I've -loved- every moment! Even with AFF.net's screwing up of the text sometimes, I just couldn't pull myself away from the computer screen... Aside from praising your work to high heaven, I just wanted to note that it sounds like you've got another sequel to this in the form of that suggestive Sanzo visiting Goku's room instead? ;-)

    Thank you for writing and I look very much forward to the next installment of Perfect World :-D
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  • From ANON - Zidane on December 02, 2004
    You bet I enjoyed it. ;) But somehow, there are spellings that come out pretty weird. o.O It kinda ruined part of it... -.-
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on August 22, 2004
    I very much enjoyed reading this. It's the second Sanzo seme I've read, that is always a bit odd.
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  • From ANON - Lindsay on July 17, 2004
    Mmmm, sexy as hell.
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  • From ANON - Shota-kun on July 17, 2004
    You made Goku the seme. I shall treasure this fic forever. There needs to be more seme Goku...
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  • From ANON - Demon45 on July 16, 2004
    No criticisms here, only comments. Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. Your ability to make the reader feel he is in the story rather than just reading it is amazing. You capture both Goku and Sanzo's characters perfectly. I love when Sanzo is playful and would imagine him with just such a wicked sense of humor. I just love how they simply know things about each other wit kno knowing why or how they know...........they just know! It's one of the traits about them I love best. And, that part with Sanzo taking himself in hand was so incredibly erotic I could almost physically feel the heat between them.

    Now, you ARE going to "show" us the next night, aren't you??? :)
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  • From ANON - Nek0-chan on July 15, 2004
    *squees happily and nuzzles*

    Since you've now put it up, I can fangirl over it to my heart's content! *grins* So, beware of scary Nek0-chan fangirlishness! XD

    First of all, the flow of the story was absolutely perfect. The pace was just right for this type of story--like I said to you before, not too long and not too short. Utterly perfect. The characterizations were perfect, as well. You were able to capture Goku's shyness (in the beginning) and his uncertainty about his relationship with Sanzo--a wonderful referral back to episode 39. =3

    As for Sanzo (OMG! Yes, I was able to tell which paragraph you were referring to in your letter, you silly dork~! XD)... amazing. You were able to capture his core: his love and concern for Goku, hidden beneath a cold exterior. LOVE. THE. CHARACTERIZATION. *cannot stress this enough*

    As for the story... plotline or no, it was still yummy. =3 One thing that I noticed that hadn't occurred to me before is the subtle hints that you give about their relationship in reference TO the plotline. The story's called 'Warmth' and its about Sanzo warming up Goku. It IS like their relationship, only reversed: in "real life" it's always Goku that warms Sanzo--by caring for him, loving him, staying with him, etc. Goku has been able to greatly "melt" the ice that has formed around Sanzo. It's usually only for Goku that Sanzo shows any concern. It's only for Goku that Sanzo has been willing to risk himself as he has done in the past. And it's only for Sanzo that Goku is willing to break through the power limiters to wreak hell on whomever had dared hurt his 'master.' Sanzo is the sun to Goku and Goku is the fire burning in the fireplace for Sanzo. Both mean the same to one another, though Goku's 'interpretation' of Sanzo goes so much more deeper-. in. into their past lives, though Goku can't really remember any of it.

    BUT!!! You are very, very sneaky for trying to put in that subtle context. As if you didn't think I'd notice. =3

    Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful job and I. Love. It. To. Bits.

    *SQUISH*


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