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Reviews for The Truth and Other Lies

By : Macx
  • From ANON - Ryoan on July 23, 2004
    I really, really like this story. I think it's so cool!
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  • From ANON - Darcy on July 22, 2004
    This is so good. I hope you update really soon. =D
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  • From ANON - firgodes7 on July 22, 2004
    Great story so far I can not wait till the next update... Wonder what will happen when Dee wakes up??
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  • From ANON - Darcy on July 20, 2004
    This is getting very interesting indeed. I hope you update real s as as I'm dying to find out what's going on. lol.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2004
    What the hell just happened? Dee has powers?! How?! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on July 20, 2004
    Good chapter! Yes, Dee!!! From 'that's not true' to being one! I'm glad that you chose Dee to be different in this story, he's more likely to switch into something else to protect Ryo. Very believable there. Liked how there was some action about io. o. I must of missed something. I'm going to have to go back and re-read it, but it surprised me about Barclay. Nothing bad about it, just brows raised in interest. So write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Ryoan on July 20, 2004
    Good one! I like it! I'm glad that you have Dee being the one with the powers. It seems more fitting. When I first started reading it I thought it might be Ryo with the secret power, but he was just an Ally. (Oh, yeah, like 'just' *smirk*), then I thought no their just going to team up and deal with 'supernatural', but I could see the power coming out in Dee. I think you got that on the nailhead that Ryo is his everything.
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  • From ANON - Ryoan on July 19, 2004
    I'm a bit into paranormal stuff so this interested me to see what you'd do. I like your character cross-overs, even though I know nothing about them, but I do like what part you have them as in this story. I couldn't see Dee rejecting Ryo...oops, sorry, guess I wrote about that..heh heh... yet still... it was like "DEE! You can't leave him for that!" I like that Buck came back in to help out too and 'showed' Dee that it was true after all. I very much got into the scenes of them together, and you just had to end it where you did, didn't you?! I hope that you have more with Vin/Buck, Ryo/Dee doing work together. Like to see some of your interesting ideas with this. Oh... ay voy vote on the Bikky character too.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2004
    I'm so happy that Dee accepted the truth and that he and Ryo are together!!
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on July 19, 2004
    Man, are you mean or what? Ending it there?! Geez! Ok, so maybe I should be grateful that you suddenly put up two chapters today, but... holy cow! Ending it there was like anti-climatic! (or however you spell it). I don't really read cross-overs... but I do enjoy this one because your cross-over characters actually 'help' out the main characters. I like that. I don't know anything about those other characters or the series their in, but I do like how you have them in this story. I think you pulled off the 'frightened' part of Dee and the 'sleeplessness' of both very well. I don't know if you intend on getting into any real story stuff about paranormals with these two or not, but I don't care. I've liked what I read so far. Please do write more....
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on July 19, 2004
    O_O.... Okay.... nice... interesting still.... Now, just keep writing more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2004
    Well, that didn't go well. I hope Dee believes Ryo and accepts him and his love. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2004
    Ryo should tell Dee. I believe Dee is very open-minded and won't dismiss what Ryo has to tell him. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on July 17, 2004
    Ok, interesting. It made me want to read further into the story when you do update again. Your writting is pretty good, but sometimes the indentation or lack of it made it a bit harder to read. I know that when someone puts a story on a site sometimes settings gets changed. Not your fault. It's just my eyes go buggy when things are more compressed. I think the story is fantasic though. I like to read stories for the merit of the story itself. Just because there's something different or doesn't quite go with the line of manga doesn't make it a bad fic to me. I did enjoy your conversational comments among them, and the little interlude between Ryo and Dee... wish THAT had been in the manga! Ok, just write more.....
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