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Reviews for Aftermath: Loss and Redemption 2

By : hawker748
  • From ANON - XC on December 18, 2004
    are you gonna keep writing it? it's very good
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  • From migele on October 19, 2004
    nice to see a continuation.

    I liked the name of Naoko, see ani't a bad woman considering what happened to her...

    well n min mind.
    hope foruickuick update.
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  • From ANON - JockoMegane on September 11, 2004

    It keeps getting better and better, thanks for updating. :)
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  • From ANON - kpxiceboi on September 11, 2004
    YA !! U UPDATED. loved dis dic still. its reallie awesome. so da plot thickens, yea, cant wait to read more, nd really curious what is goin to happen to Naru, and also Kitsune, now, yea pretty cool, and im sure that motoko and keitaro will alway tog together ^^ so update soon, ok ?
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  • From Jocko on September 10, 2004

    Again, very good work on this clearly above average Lemon. Keitarooko oko are so cute. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2004
    u never cease to disappoint. thats good. awesome stories you make, very detailed and romantic, the perfect thing for this story.
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  • From ANON - Enviral on August 24, 2004
    Dear Hawker,

    The "Loss and Redemption" series is one of the top 5 fanfics I have ever read. You have captured the characters' personalities perfectly. I must also praise you for actually using good grammar and spelling in addition to a long, involved and engaging ylinyline with *gasp* PLOT.

    You are an exeptional writer and I hope to see you complete the "Loss and Redemption series.


    Your New Devoted Fan,

    Enviral
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  • From ANON - S.M. on August 16, 2004
    can't wait for more,please update as soon as possible
    maybe you could put in the scene where she goes into labor
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  • From ANON - Ken on July 24, 2004
    wow thats a lil scary... i JUST got finished ing ing your other story saying biy i cant wait till part two comes out and then i wkaeup the next day and ill be damned but it was there lol. well i am looking forward to this sotry very much and your right alot of people may have used the motoko and keitaro pairing based on the married theme but your in uncharted waters now man so do what ever you think will best suit yourself and the readers of your story. i know ill be reading it thats for sure.



    - Ken -
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  • From ANON - mr 1ce on July 23, 2004
    ey i loved da sequel. nd im glad dat u wrote one. nd dunt be afriad, cuz ur like a pionner, in da fanfic world den, ami rite? nd u js started off good. as long as its a kei/motoko fic, i tink its great.
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  • From ANON - Chorp on July 22, 2004
    I have been waiting for a sequel since the 1st Loss and Redemption on Fanfiction.net. Chapter 2 will be the next thing I'll be waiting for.
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  • From ANON - Sirzoaic on July 22, 2004
    Great story, I loved the original, and am looking forward to you finishing this idea. there is great potential to this line of thought, and has made me rethink my original ideas on the keitaro/motoko pairing, as I have actually been partial to K/Mistumi or K/K
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