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Reviews for Falling in Lover with the enemy

By : syaoranlover713
  • From on February 18, 2007
    coooollllll,mega cooooool
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  • From Sachiko16 on January 19, 2006
    that's really cute!!!! i liked it alot!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lalala on March 28, 2005
    Your ideas are good but you really need a beta reader. Your grammar really is terrible. It's disjointed and doesn't move along smoothly. There are a lot of mistakes that distract from the story. I hope you take this as constructive criticism and not a flame, but you really need to work on the grammar. Get a beta reader or proofread it thoroughly.
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  • From ANON - gamegirl546 on July 28, 2004
    i just wanted to say that i love your story i thought that it was really good. i hope that you make a sequel to it.
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  • From fantasycat on March 20, 2004
    Awesome fic goodness!!!
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  • From ANON - gamegirl546 on March 20, 2004
    your story was good i liked it i hope you come out with a new chapter soon
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  • From ANON - S/L 4ever on February 17, 2004
    Whoa! That had tons of lemon in it! Very intersting story.
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  • From ANON - gamegirl546 on February 05, 2004
    Your Story was really good i hope you wrte a sequel to it. Keep it up you are a really good writer.
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  • From ANON - Ultima Frown on July 20, 2003
    God, this shit is fucking terrible! Take writing classes, for God's sakes or pay better attention in English class. I mean, damn!
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  • From ANON - EcuaGirl on June 10, 2003
    Guess who?? ME!! So you finally posted all of your chapters of "Falling in Love With the Enemy"! Keep up the good work! Aren't you gonna post the rest of your lemons from ff.net here, just in case?
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