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Reviews for Traitors Embrace, Inhuman Creation

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  • From ANON - Castor on July 05, 2005
    The first chap is a little hard to read, but i like the story all the same. I understand how it is when you just want to get your stuff posted. Poor Robin and Amon, but i trust that it will be a good story.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 19, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on May 12, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - phoenix on May 09, 2005
    hey, i love this story, very interesting. please update soon!!!!!!!!!! oh and phoenix is my real name too just to let you know i'm flaterd you used my name!!
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  • From ANON - Nightmare_Man on May 06, 2005
    lol............. go ahead and laugh at my name.
    but i swear it is only a really weird coincadence. Anywho, great story. You can sit at the cool kids table now. But to keep your seat u have to keep updating.
    great job. see u in your nightmares.
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  • From ANON - Love You on May 04, 2005
    OH MY GOD your back and better then ever, i loved the part about the playful banter between Amon and robin, i can wait for you to update again
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on March 30, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - becki on March 13, 2005
    oh, i just love this story its getting good........im guesing robinis phoenix,update soon please p.s. sorry for miss spells
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  • From ANON - NUNI on January 18, 2005
    This is good. I like it so far, it's interesting. So who is this other guy who loves her but stabs her?! That's fucked up! Anyway what her relationship with Seth? Just to be evil and make Amon suffer a little longer why not have Seth make Amon a little jelous.=p Update soon!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 22, 2004
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From oldwolf on October 13, 2004
    Interesting so far, great story I hope it's continued. Please though, please get a beta reader. It might slow down updates, but the grammer and blatant misspellings are painful.
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  • From ANON - Paranoid on August 31, 2004
    I like where this is going. I am glad you have Amon seeing Robin in this more mature light. I wish I had thought of that. :>)
    I like your style, darker than most Writeriters.
    Would you like a beta? I lurve to beta. (just an offer. all offers are free and since this is so, you can ball this one up and toss it to the fishes)

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  • From ANON - The Sock on August 26, 2004
    Robin THREW the ball at Amon.

    Robin climbed THROUGH the window.

    Threw, past e ofe of the the verb throw.

    Through, an adverb, preposition or adjective. Used generally to describe passage between something, or from one point to another. Adjectively it can also be used to describe completion.

    Same sound, different spellings and uses. Please make note of this for future chapters. Remember, Spell and Grammar check can only take you so far. It's important that you personally screen your story for errors.

    This irked me, otherwise, the plot seems to be progressing nicely.
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  • From ANON - Paranoid on August 16, 2004
    Wow! You came back and strong. Thank you for adressing my concerns. Nicely done. There are still a few times nearer the end with capitilization keeps dissaperaing. But all in all, highly improved.

    I like where this story is heading. Please keep writing. You have guts.

    Sincerly,
    Paranoid
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 16, 2004
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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