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Reviews for Breakfast, Lunch, and Dinner

By : jadedragon83
  • From ANON - mala on May 29, 2005
    Good god, that was amazing. Like, you always breathe a little fast reading lemons, but yours went beyond that. Leon and D were in character, and seemed like real people--the way they thought, acted, etc. And South Park is anything but the best show on cable, but the quote was very appropriate. *laugh* I always took Orcot for the somewhat homophobic type, but the idea is...interesting. Really, he's just in denial. My favorite thing was your descriptions, though. Almost like a movie, only better. There were a few typos and places where the setences didn't quite make sense(mostly in Part 1), but otherwise, AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - Null_In_Void on April 30, 2005
    beautiful, awesome, wonderful.....I can't think of a worth word that can describe this fic appropriately...I'm in awe let's just say that ^_^'
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  • From ANON - me on April 20, 2005
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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  • From ANON - Flamingolo on March 01, 2005
    *happy sigh* Since my review got deleted somehow, this is my pathetic, quasi-review. Loved this fic, absolutely one of the hottest lemons I've ever read. I adore you!
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  • From ANON - Lady Mashala on February 12, 2005
    SEQUILE!!! (ACK! Bad spelling... >
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  • From tareacel on January 31, 2005
    Well damn. I was really hoping you were going to get this story done, and you did! Yay!! And whew...I must say, that was hot. For a first story, that's wonderfully brilliant. I'm only up to #6 in the manga, but I already love D...and I already want to see he and Leon together. heeheehee. I could read this over and over again. You're great at spreading out and then building up tension again. And you show different sides of the characters without taking them out of character. That's a good gift. :) I would love to read any more Pet Shop stories you publish. Write more! :)

    ~Tareacel
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  • From ANON - anubiset on January 06, 2005
    That was amazing. So hot, and and I don`t know, it got me going. For a first that was a pro. I really really enjoyed it and I beleive I print it out just so I can read it again and again and never have to search for it.
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  • From ANON - Dark Mystik on January 05, 2005
    deliciously sinful *^^* keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Ed on January 01, 2005
    Dear lord...That was just...Amazing. For the love of all that is holy-Update soon!
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  • From ANON - breathless_night on December 30, 2004
    You´re kidding me right, it cant be your first PSOF fic, I really enjoyed it =), what a talent you have , I´D LOVE TO READ A SECUEL TO THIS ONE, YOÚ´RE JUST TO GOOOOODDDDDDDD, keep going.

    I liked a lot the way you portrated Leon, its nice to see him a litte relaxed like that LOL


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  • From ANON - Stranj100 on December 28, 2004
    Most satisfying.
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  • From ANON - jemisard on December 28, 2004
    Gah....

    It's cold, and I want to take off clothes that was so hot. Very, very hot. And sexy. And yummy. And... ::wipes brow:: I really liked it. I love your semeLeon. I knwo Leon's usually seme, but I really like yours.

    That is the longest, hottest PWP I've ever read. ^_~ I loved it.
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  • From ANON - zero on December 24, 2004
    i love it i love it il love it i love it i love it.............but its not finished!!!.......or part of it was cut off.......but pleasepleasepleaseplaeseplaese fix it....im dying!i love this fic, it great how leon is still kinda in charcter, hes so cute when hes angry ^_^ hope to read more from you soon



    Zero -_-
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  • From ANON - kokouo being lazy on December 11, 2004
    aww more please love the story
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  • From ANON - Lady_Mashala on December 07, 2004
    I love it! XD Write some more.... I can't wait to read more! ^^
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