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Reviews for Cyber Fun!

By : DeeLaytner
  • From ANON - Deelaytner390 on September 10, 2004
    when i am done with this story i am going to write one with dee and jj and then one for gravitation

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  • From ANON - JJ on September 09, 2004
    *grins all evil-like* I'm so bad! X3
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2004
    What happened? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Christina on September 09, 2004
    MORE MORE MOREy isy is Ryo crying?! DEE tell me why is he crying?! MORE! Come on you gotta tell me at least! Come on! MORE MORE MORE! And don't put you know what in the story please?! I'm begging you! But why is Ryo crying?! I'm confused! I mfindfind out what happens! DEE!
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  • From ANON - anna on September 08, 2004
    Why is Ryo crying? Oh! You're so naughty for leaving it there! I think YOU need punished! *Pulls out whip* If you don't update soon....*Cracks Whip*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2004
    Did Ryo just ask Dee if he wanted to have cyber sex? Shy Ryo?! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Deelaytner on September 08, 2004
    thanks to all of you who keep reading
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  • From ANON - liltoyalova on September 08, 2004
    I hate when you leave us hanging like this! Dee you big meanie! But besides that it was really really good! Welp hope to see more soon! I hate it when you do this leave me hanging like this you will pay! (just kidding)
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  • From ANON - KD on September 08, 2004
    you know you want it, don't you Dee? (grins)
    Wooooo! Start the cyber sex! It's soooo hot!
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  • From ANON - Deelaytner on September 03, 2004
    thanks for all your reviews i'm typing chapter 2 as we type.

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2004
    This was a decent story. A couple of mispelled words here and theut nut nothing to serious. Also this story was a little rushed and really didn't go anywhere. Could of used some space between paragraphs to help with the reading. Now I am not dissing your work I really do hope to see you keep writing also hope to see you update soon.
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  • From DeeLaytner on August 29, 2004
    i want to thank you so much for you reviews they mean alot to me thanks

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  • From ANON - JJ on August 29, 2004
    OMGOMGOMG! *hugs you* I can't wait for the next chapter! XD *Big grin*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2004
    Good so far. Please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - anna on August 27, 2004
    Do a chapter 2! I want to see what happens next!
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