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Reviews for Shine

By : LadyShiva
  • From RedHedLvr on January 09, 2005
    I loved this story! I'm new to Hellsing but have to agree, there are not enough AxS fics out there. You really built the tension between the two quite well, I thought. And you're right, an old world gent would treat a lady gently her first time! Hope you write some more AxS soon.
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  • From SilverFox on December 29, 2004
    Very good story I liked it immensely! Indeed I did! And ironies of ironies, I just watched the last three episodes of Helling just tonight! This was an interesting take on the plot. I liked how you added your own twist to it is what I mean. I especially liked the way you had Seras make Alucard jealous, or more specifically, his reaction to the part he eavesdropped on! Heh heh...It was funny..he tripped poor Walter and stole his monocle (sp?). That was hilarious indeed! ^_^ Too bad there isn't anymore..It would have been great I bet. Until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aliana on December 10, 2004
    I couldnt stop reading this! I was wonderful! Words cant even describe the way I feel about this story right now.
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  • From ANON - ian on December 03, 2004
    wow that was good "breathless"
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  • From ANON - Lady Shiva on December 02, 2004
    omfg, I THOUGHT I TOLD YA BITCHES NOT TO EVEN REVIEW THIS SHITTY STORY! SO IGNORE IT PUNKS!
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on December 02, 2004
    Absolutely loved it. I'm usually hanging out in the InuYasha and YuGiOh areas, but figured I'd swing by here, and I must say that I'm glad I did. I liked the story, and I don't think Alucard was all that OOC at all. You developed his thoughts on the subject well enough to make it very plausible.

    Well done, and I do hope you write a sequal : )

    DracOnyx
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  • From on November 30, 2004
    Very good I unenjoyed this fic..
    P-M
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  • From ANON - LadyShiva on November 28, 2004
    IGNORE THIS FUCKING STORY! I AM A BAD AUTHOR, SO FUCKING REVIEW IT AND SAY IT IS BAD! FLAME ME NOW!!!! YA MORONS! I HATE Hellsing ALWAYS now!!!!!! STUPID SLICK FUCKER. Well anyway just please flame me or else I'm gonna hunt you down and not publish any more fanfictions for AxS forever!
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  • From ANON - Alucard Fangirl and true love on November 28, 2004
    HOLY FUCK THAT WAS SOME GREAT SHIT!!!! IT MADE ME FALL OUT OF THE CHAIR SEVERAL TIMES AND WEIRDLY, MADE MY EYES WATERY, I ALSO STARTED TO NOSEBLEED OF THE LEMON!!! YA WRITE SOME GREAT HELLSING LEMON FANFICTIONS, KEEP IT UP AND WRITE ONE FOR AxI!!!
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  • From ANON - Mistress_Io on November 27, 2004
    Oh I see you finally finished this story! This is definatly one of the better hellsing pieces I have read to date. One of the strongest points is how you portray the AxSxI triangle so perfectly from Seras' POV. It makes it so charming because WE, seeing the story through Seras' eyes know only what she herself knows. I don't know if i'm imagining things, but I think I could see a good threesome fic working its way into a sequal! Btw, I simple ADORED the lemon in the last chapter. It had just the right mix of romance and passion. the whole clothes ripping and blood drinking just gave it that feral spark that makes hawt vampire on vampire sex so fun! That and the ending was still sweet and romantic, but left us wondering. I mean, Integra never said she wasnt involved with Alucard, just that she didnt think she was in LOVE with him. truly I think its hard to write a AxS story thats not dark and twisted, but still IC.I think you have pulled it off beautifully without making it sappy. No one likes a lovesick Alucard after all! Anyway, I can't wait for more fics from you, and i'm sure i'm not the only one who shares the sentiment.
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  • From ANON - tani on November 05, 2004
    I havn't read a good hellsing fanfic untill i came across yours! I hope you have the next chapter up soon and keep up the good work, peace out!
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  • From ANON - LBH on November 03, 2004
    more soon
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  • From ANON - Arista on October 24, 2004
    Yay! I'm really enjoying this AxS fic so far! I really like how all the characters seem in character, not to mention the sub-plots are very enjoyable! Whee I shall continue on reading, please keep writing more! ^_~
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  • From ANON - ~*~Sparky~*~ on October 23, 2004
    I adore this story...*giggles* You capture the character's personalities very well and it pleased me to read it...plus some of those Seras/Alucard scenes were fogging up the windows. Please write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 11, 2004
    :(! comooooon no kissing? hurry and write it -.-; make lotsa kissing and suff! *wink* ^_~
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