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Reviews for Shine

By : LadyShiva
  • From ANON - Mischief on October 11, 2004
    Like this story alot!! Keep it going please!
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  • From ANON - Lilith Fair on September 14, 2004
    Omg i can't waaaait! You have to update soon! It's getting really good, i can't wait for them to finally lose You You know they both want to!
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  • From ANON - Mistress Io on September 14, 2004
    Wow more wonderful chapters. What can I say? I'm really happy you decided to expand the story from a setup and a one shot. I think it's really coming along beautifully. I love the way you are intergrating Seras' POV during the episodes into the story. it really gives a fresh incite into everyones favorite anime! Btw I loved chapter 3, the ending was snuggly sweet, and chapter two was just hot. Yay for blood licking Alucard!
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  • From ANON - LadyShiva on September 13, 2004
    In response to the question of what a beat would have to do: Basicly a beta is like an editor. I send you the chapter before it gets put up, you read over it and correct any spelling/gramatical errors the author might have made. Also sugestions on the story itself never hurt either. I was really surprised that I got some 5 offers for a beta over the last 3 days n.n; I feel loved. So I think one of them might do, hehe. I'm sorry for the errors this far. Even when I read over my stories I always seem to miss some. I blame it on my bad eyes! hehe anyway...Chapter 4 is almost done. The reveiws inspired me so much! I'll post it soon.
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  • From ANON - Nami_chan on September 13, 2004
    I love your story, its excellent, poor Seras though ;_;....update soonase?ase?
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 12, 2004
    oh, oh! i'll review!! I found this story a long time ago at FF.Net, but i dont think the 3rd chap had been uploaded there, cause when i read it here, it was new to me. ah, anyway, i'll have you know that plenty of people DO read this story and i know that at least *I* love it! it could use a beta reader or an editor just for spelling and grammer, but all in all its really great! the typos arent so bad that they are really noticable but as an English Lit and Grammer major, its my job to pick up on that stuff. ^__^ Anyway, my point is, i really really like this story (*fangirls AxS like a foolish git*) and I implore you to continue with it. No, i beg you!! its really well written and i like the idea, so please, go on!!
    Good luck with the story and congrats on a great write!
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  • From ANON - Reesechan on September 12, 2004
    I love this one. Please write more. I may have to sign up on this ff.ne since the fic I am currently posting on the other ff.net the later chapters would fit up here.
    What would a beta have to do?
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  • From ANON - anonymous on September 11, 2004
    well i'll review it for ya^_^! i think its pretty good especially how you've mixed the episodes with it. It kinda feels like this is wat happened when like nobody is watchin or somethin like that. neways keep it up i look forward to another chapter from you in the future ^_^!
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  • From ANON - soulraven_mp on September 11, 2004
    I'm hooked. Dont stop. Its soo very very good.
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  • From ANON - danielle on September 10, 2004
    i really like your story keep writing

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  • From ANON - Kitty Kamen on September 10, 2004
    Omg new chapter! *dances with glee* Your writting is so sexy, with just the right amount of angst. I can't wait for promised smoochies!!
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  • From ANON - Nami_chan on September 10, 2004
    more...soon..nowww! @_@
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  • From ANON - soulraven on September 04, 2004
    Wow. This is realy good. Please keep working on it. 8D
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  • From LadyShiva on August 31, 2004
    Thanks for the reveiwes guys! Chapter 2 is now going to be..um well, it's going to be at the end now. So i'm in the process of writing chapter 2, again? Something like that. Don't worry. Updates WILL be made.
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  • From ANON - silverrose on August 30, 2004
    Very nice so far. I hope the second chapter will be up soon. Can't wait to read it. It's nice to see someone bring out Alucard's softer siot tot that there's anything wrong with his harder side.)
    Silverrose
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