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Reviews for Shine

By : LadyShiva
  • From ANON - Star Kaliya on August 29, 2004
    Wow allyally like this story so far! Plz update soon ok?
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  • From ANON - Gin Ryu on August 29, 2004
    A nice start, very well done. I like your flowing style of writing, and the way you switch from one character to another. Not to mention some of adj adjectives are great. Update with lemony goodness soon!
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  • From ANON - mistress_io on August 29, 2004
    There's nothing in the world i love more then a good A/S fic. This one has all the making of one! I simply love the way you switch back and forth between the two, having them sort of relive the same events thru their own eyes. It was incredibly refreshing some of the little touches you added in as well. Things like the diffrences in speak patternsd thd the fact that they were almost answering each others questions. I liked also the recuring things that you kept throughout. Things like Seras refered to Anderson's sword as a blessed blade, and Alucard called it a cursed one. its neat the way you paint them as two sides of the same sword. Oh and i think it's cute how Alucard is trying to act like a bastard, and pretend he dosnt care. poor Seras! Does she know how to pick em. Btw, love the idea of Seras cleaning her master's face. Woot! Write more soon!
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