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Reviews for The Black Hawke--NEW FEB 1

By : Lin

From ANON - yoh_sama on January 01, 2005
wow.. another good chapter. thnx for updating.honestly I'm hooked over w/ this pairing. great alternative besides frm Ken/Kao. Kaoru is goin to work to Aoshi wah..(lookin forward to it) dat wud be good. though I hve a Question. Did Aoshi ever considered living with Kaoru? I kno it's a bit early for them..but if he thinks about her all the time, wudnt he just choose to live w/ her? aniweis.. Happy New year. update soon please^_^
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From ANON - Lere on December 31, 2004
Sensei, sensei!!!! I have to tell you before it's too late: Battousai is growling in the shadows!!! "Tha weasel and meeeeeeeeeeee????????? First shinobi boy with my Kaoru-dono and now the weasel and me????? I think it's the time to practice Amakakeru Ryu No Hirameki before this crazy lady writes a lemon about us..."

Sensei! Do you have a death wish? Tisk, tisk...

Big hugs from Brazil!

Lere
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From ANON - catti-dono on December 31, 2004
what can be said Tsuki-sama, its another great chapter even though there is no lemon, cries....pouts...it a good chapter cannot wait for the next long awaited up date and how you are going to interact kenshin and kauro....please dont pair kenshin and Misao thats just tooo cruel....on Kenshin's part....laughs...love ya...catti-dono
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From ANON - kira-san on December 27, 2004
Wah.. a very gud fic (eps. the sex scene, really really hot.) Aoshi kinda reminds me of Inuyasha. Hopefully u will continue and complete the story.
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From ANON - AlexaNight on December 25, 2004
Wow, such a quick update I almost missed it! Another b-e-a-utiful A/K interaction. You're really getting me hooked on this pairing.

Bless, and Merry Christmas
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From ANON - yoh_sama on December 21, 2004
wow.. I never read an Aoshi and Kaoru fic. this my 1st and I quite like it. As a matter of fact I do really love it. Are u still goin to upload? hope so.. I really admire ur stories and hope u continue on. Please do continue,,
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From ANON - CD on December 16, 2004
the story is progressing well and I like how you have paced the timeline...doesn't feel rushed or anything.
you may want to be aware that some of your earlier chapters are missing pieces, (the fight scene in the diner and the conversation between A&K where he tells her how many members are really in the gang, and such)
mostly portions of your earlier chapters.

keep up the writing

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From ANON - AnimeFetish19 on December 14, 2004
AWWW!!! POOR AOSHI!!! He shouldn't blame himself!!! His father was a basterd!!! I loved this chapter! He finally opened up to her about who he really was!!! Yayness!!!

-Missy
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From ANON - mz.amber eyes on December 13, 2004
ooh... kenshin doesnt know what she looks like... doth my ears decieve me? you i hear a start of a love triangle coming on, or am i wrong? is kenshin goign to fall for kaoru too? not knowing that she's aoshi's girl? ooh, just don't make kaoru betray aoshi in any way if i am right. update soon!! i totally loved it!
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From ANON - Malik\'s Girl on December 13, 2004
Oh God, don't stop writing this!!! I fall deeper and deeper in love with it with every chap!!! It's just so cuuuute!!! I'm so looking foward to their dinner with Kenshin (wouldn't be just super if he kinda fell for her too??? or are you planning to hook him up with Misao?! that'd be fun too...)... please keep going, ok?! I luv this fic!!! ^_^
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From ANON - chibified kitsunes on December 13, 2004
heh, well i'm back!! ^_^ i actually used chibi before... anyway, that was a pretty good filler chapter you had there. pretty much explained tons of stuff and had some random sanoxcho humor inserted into it as well! i liked it... keep up the awesome work!!! ^_^
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From ANON - AlexaNight on December 11, 2004
Wonderful chapter. And very informative at that. Everything about Yumi and Shishou's betrayal has become clear now. Very nice, Kanzen-sama
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From ANON - animefetish19 on December 11, 2004
What do you mean darker side...and what are you going to do to make me want to egg ur house??? He better not do something to hurt her in anyway!!! *Watches you closely* I know something devious is going on inside of that brain of yours! Don't make me have to whip out the toilet paper too!! I'll do it!!!

Hehe, update soon please!!

-Missy
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From ANON - catti-dono on December 09, 2004
okay; so I already read like chapter 9 (gomen, I think) on MediaMiner.org and, of course, just loved it; but was thinking that Kenshin is getting hungry and just happens to be passing by a diner???? Giggles; Im soooo evil!!!!!
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From ANON - chibified kitsunes on November 18, 2004
that was awesome!!!!!! i loved the chapter!!! great job!!
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