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  • From ANON - Klara on October 12, 2004
    feel no pressure of producing more material. it couldn´t get any better than this anyway... yey!
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  • From ANON - anti on October 09, 2004
    wow english isnt your first language???????????????????? your write really well too, i mean i read alot of fanfic's and half of them sound like they were written by 3 year olds. you have my respect man i couldnt write a decent paragraph in ish ish and im in spanish 3 keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Pi-chan on September 30, 2004
    OMG If anyone flames this fic I swear I will hunt them down and kill them! This fic is awsome!!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - ayama on September 29, 2004
    it's a little OOC but other then that its really interesting. please continue ^^
    Ja ne
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  • From ANON - MimiruChan on September 29, 2004
    First of all, it was awsome ^__^ I loved it! The one thing that I didn't like too much was the sex scence o.o which is strange cuz that' usually my favorite part! xDD Still it was hot =D
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  • From ANON - Alexx the Hopeless on September 29, 2004
    Alexx: English isn't thy native tongue? I would have not guessed, for thy words are moving

    Yuki: (translating: english isn't your first language? Who knew, you write very well)

    Alexx: continue on thy journey on one-time romance poetry

    Yuki: (translating: please write more one-shot fanfic poetry) Can't speak you just speak in regular english, and not all this fancy mid-evil crap?

    Alexx: Damare! you're ruining the effect!

    Shuichi: don't you dare tell my Yuki to shut up!

    Alexx: you shut up to before I write a fanfic where Eiri-san rapes you

    Shuichi: (whimpering in fear)

    Alexx: please write more fanfics like these, you're very good
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  • From ANON - AkaTsuki on September 29, 2004
    your right about it being a bit fluffy (which isnt really bad) and im pretty sure shu and eiri have lots of fights, besides that and the ooc-ness (mostly eiri) its pretty daood ood ^^

    ~*Aka
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