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Reviews for Cascade Gym luv

By : Kenshin
  • From Lyfe on June 27, 2007
    Plot was good, leave Brock out of it. I hate others who interfere with AshxMisty! That was off to too fast a start, give us the chapter that prompted this event! Oh and make sure Ash and Misty have really good, ol' dirty sex; I love that! hehehe!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2006
    Haha! That was great!! You guys should back off! Maybe it was supposed to be short and funny...lol I thought it was funny...Like a five minute cartoon short...hmm Well thanks for the laughs!
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  • From ANON - john on September 04, 2006
    that was the worst pile of crap i have ever seen on this site.
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  • From ANON - Jjjon the draco on August 13, 2006
    its good and all but you rushed it a little too much. Just a little more detail and it be all good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2006
    .......
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  • From ANON - ThyReviewee on May 13, 2005
    Holy... cheese.

    That was effing annoying.

    Never do that again.

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  • From ANON - Matt Gross on March 05, 2005
    I liked this lemon alot. But, I wonder how Ash got into the girl's locker room? And what was Misty thinking that made her decide to jump on top of Ash and have sex with him while they were in the girl's locker room? Do you think you could write a chapter saying what caused them to do those things. Maybe Misty was doing it to punish Ash or perhaps she thought this was the perfect chance for her to have sex with the boy she has a crush on. Think about it. I like the Ash/Misty couple.
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  • From ANON - Matt Gross on November 23, 2004
    I enjoyed it very much, but I think I'd like to see how Ash gets into the girl's locker room accidentilly (what he was doing before he got into the locker room and what he was thinking about that made him come in without realizing it) and maybe Brock should be left out. I think it would also be nice to know what made Misty decide to have sex with Ash when she caught him peeping (what she was thinking when Ash looked at her vagina) that would be nice too.
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  • From ANON - Matt Gross on November 23, 2004
    I enjoyed it very much, but I think I'd like to see how Ash gets into the girl's locker room accidentilly (what he was doing before he got into the locker room and what he was thinking about that made him come in without realizing it) and maybe Brock should be left out.
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  • From ANON - ... on August 29, 2004
    "hehe"... Let me think, no. It sucks ass.
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  • From ANON - The_Rater on August 18, 2004
    You have got serious problems and never had sex in your life but apparently need it in short your fucked up dude

    i give this a 0 out of 10
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  • From ANON - An Idiot on April 01, 2004
    Pointless, but also kind of in a good way. You should continue this and add a little more detail.
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  • From ANON - KoChanneo on October 08, 2003
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    What the hell was that?
    *I just wasted a whole 30 seconds of my life reading that!?!*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2003
    cool...
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  • From ANON - Vesta on June 18, 2003
    This fic... to put it blantly, was not the best in the world. You could do with elaborating more, and they were all VERY OoC. You may want to find a suitable beta reader to go over your fics and help you out. You have a lot of work to do if you want to be a good fanfic writer, so please, I encourage you, get a beta reader and check out some of the other fanfics and see what is different about yours and theirs. E-mail me if you'd like to talk more.
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