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Reviews for Ash\'s Revenge

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  • From ANON - McKnight on October 31, 2005
    I thought Delia was single. Just because Oak was much older than her, why would that be a reason for Ash to be mad at him for dating her?
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  • From ANON - TriRedEye on January 29, 2005
    Nice story. Looking forward to the next installment of the Chronicles.
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  • From ANON - Funkyafroman on January 29, 2005
    That was one of the best fanfics I have ever read. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Akewataru on January 17, 2005
    Hey remember me? I'm that Bassoon player that contacted you a few months before. Hopefully, I should be going to college on the east coast. Wow, I had no idea you wrote this story until today. This is a awesome a story and is the best one on adultfanfiction.net hands down! Oh, about your sequel to Sibling Rivalry, sounds good continue with it! If you need any suggestions just e-mail me. Ciao babe.

    ~Akewataru~
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  • From ANON - Funkyafroman on January 17, 2005
    Damn that was a good chapter. Mrs. Ketchum got very humiliated. I'm starting to hate Proffeser Oak. Mrs. Ketchum is a bitch. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Funkyafroman on January 08, 2005
    So that Tuilli (bastard) Brock was under hypnosis the whole time? Freaky stuff right there. Another great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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  • From WednesdayOboe on January 04, 2005
    This was pretty interesting. Strange, and very ooc, but interesting. I look forward to more, if you decide to write more.
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  • From ANON - Bio1590 on December 28, 2004
    Left hand works good if you're right handed and you're sitting at the computer :P
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  • From ANON - Funkyafroman on December 26, 2004
    Here Iam on the first day getting my new computer hooked up reviewing this. Thank you for not letting that Sacco di merda (Italian for Bag of shit) touch Misty in a sexual way. That was a good chapter. I hope Brock doesn't hurt the baby in any way. As for your male masturbation question, I don't masturbate much because I am a good boy =). But when I do, I use my right hand to rub the shaft.
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  • From ANON - 3rik on December 17, 2004
    LMFAO! PIKACHU ROX!
    Thats is hilarious!
    But the overall story was good
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  • From ANON - Bio1590 on December 12, 2004
    Just so you know, 10,000 volts is less than what you receive if you get shocked by a doorknob, so Brock couldn't have died. People have been hit by 1,000,000-10,000,000 volts from Lightning and lived. It would have to be pretty high to kill Brock.
    Anyways, this story kicks ass!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2004
    please explain what Brock meant, I'm worried about Misty and the baby
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  • From ANON - Sies807 on December 07, 2004
    Yet another sucessful chapter Woot Brock Burn like the fucker he was
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  • From ANON - Funkyafroman on December 07, 2004
    Great story. But I have a question. I know I am an idiot so sorry about the stupidity. Did brock poison Misty or something? Or did he fuck her? Anyway, keep up the great work. You have a lot of talent.
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  • From ANON - Patrick on December 04, 2004
    Gah!!! Brock needs to be beaten, quartered, drawn, shot, stabbed, and kicked repeatedly. I can't believe he is sabotaging their baby, hes such a horrible bastard. I love the story, so emotional and shocking
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