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Reviews for Crash and Burn

By : kaisa
  • From on January 16, 2006
    it was good, but something really pissed me off.

    How did yuki thrust inside of her when he was wearing clothes, and she was wearing clothes as well....that just really shited me off.
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  • From on August 02, 2005
    Man you suck so much ass. Stop writing now and never come here again unless it's to read you stupid shit. Reasons:1. You rushed the lemon.2. None does it right after they say they want to.3. There has to be peoper stimulation from the girl or it will hurt her.Basically Thoru should have been really wet.
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  • From ANON - winry on June 12, 2005
    yea.........it is crappy...........:).but interesting
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  • From ANON - me on May 31, 2005
    hasnt yuki ever heard of foreplay

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2004
    the end wasn't THAT crappy. cute story...
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  • From ANON - kaisa on November 18, 2004
    Oh geee, IT'S MY FIRST FUCKING LEMON!

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  • From ANON - DiablaBlanca on November 09, 2004
    Wow. Could the description of sex get anymore cliche and bland? And could you possibly think up a dumber situation to turn into teh omg HAWT sex0rz? This has even less plot than blatantly PWP smut.
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  • From ANON - kaisa on October 15, 2004
    I just read over it and I made alot of Spelling errors. I promise to fix them and re-edit the story. My first lemon story ever! I've been delayed on Wolf's Howl since I have my lil brother who keeps on crying >.> Thanks for reading, guys! Would you guys like a sequel?

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  • From newyorker18 on October 13, 2004
    It wasn't bad. It was actually very g I I loved the idea of how you got them together.
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  • From ANON - jen on October 10, 2004
    well, well it's was good. I always love a good yuki and tohru lemon
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