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Reviews for I'm Begging You Please!

By : Cassie05
  • From ANON - phycoticsquirrlygil on February 26, 2005
    please update I really enjoy it *smirk*XD
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  • From ANON - Lovia Silverleaf on February 24, 2005
    This is a pretty good story, but it looks like you need a beta reader to go over your work just to make minor corrections. But other then that I think that you are doing a great job with the story. If you need a beta reader I would be more then happy to help you out.
    Lovia
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  • From ANON - elfgirl on February 08, 2005
    Please continue, it's getting very interesting!
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  • From ANON - weeeee on January 28, 2005
    Just a few things to work on: your fic is filled with grammar and spelling mistakes. The characters are also rather OOC and the dialogues are corny at times. Here's how I would rate the fic:

    Grammar/spelling : 6/10
    Originality : 6.5/10
    Style of writing: 7/10
    Character development + plot devices: 6/10

    Overall 6.5/10

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  • From ANON - angie on January 07, 2005
    love the story

    please write more
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  • From ANON - jadelotus on December 28, 2004
    YUMMY! MORE PLEASE! I MUST SEE A THREESOME WITH RYUICHI. PLEEEEEEEEEEEESE! THE COCK RING WAS A GREAT ADDITION! HEHEHEHEH THIS FIC GAVE ME SOME VERY HENTAI IDEAS. KEEP *UP* THE GREAT MORK.
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  • From ANON - campurr on December 21, 2004
    Smash.One good reveiw,yea I like the idea.Write ,pretty please.
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  • From ANON - plzz on December 20, 2004
    oh god! please! more!
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  • From ANON - Kireania on December 07, 2004
    HHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII AGAIN I was just reading this again because i love it and i was wondering when the hell you were going to update it....OH and just so you know i reviewed once before only i used the name Eli. So srry about the name change. please continue....if you need ideas just ask me...another thing please, because i'm an english freak wen it comes to other peoples' english please please use spell check if you don't have it then you could send it to me and i will spell check it and send it back to you. I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY AND PLOT. SMUT IS THE BEST PLOT
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  • From ANON - TOMB on December 05, 2004
    WOW, I WISH MY TOWN HAD A PLACE THAT SOLD COCKRINGS, PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - DivinePunishment on November 26, 2004
    Threesome those three =hawt. I love your fic and idea, so please go on with the story. I can't wait to read the next installment! :)
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  • From ANON - Midnight on November 08, 2004
    *heavy breathing*

    Oh my gosh you had me on the edge the whole time! Please please update so me and the others can enjoy the story.

    I think my lip is bleeding from biting it so hard. *wipes lip* Damn. I need vasalene

    Update soon!

    --Midnight--
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  • From on November 06, 2004
    Great story! I like this idea of Shuichi being a sex slave; besides for some grammar errors your story is great and I hope you can update soon! Loving this story!!!!
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  • From ANON - Isabel on November 05, 2004
    I think you're a good writer and should continue the story!
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  • From ANON - dookin on November 04, 2004
    More please!!! *nose bleeds*
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