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Reviews for I'm Begging You Please!

By : Cassie05
  • From ANON - mist on November 04, 2004
    woowee that was a hot one. I just love Yuki's meanness thats the only way he shows he cares. hmmm....when do we get the threesome? Might I suggest that Ryu gets to be a seme and yuki is uke or maybe Schu is the seme and Ryu is the uke?(maybe maybe not). Well I like Gravitation but I like Weiss better *goes and glomps on Aya* but it's fun to read about other Bishonen occasionally *glomps on Sanzo* and that outfit we do get to see it again right?
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  • From ANON - FleeingFaith on November 03, 2004
    Oh my god... You'd better do the next chapter before I hunt you down and sit on your couch and stare at you like a vulture.

    Now write the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Loki on November 02, 2004
    I really, truly, absolutely LOVED, your third chapter. PLEASE keep writing. I love imagimagery, and graphics, i just love yaoi but this has been one of the best stories i've read in a while... THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
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  • From ANON - Cal Sathe on November 01, 2004
    I bow in your essence!! ::Bows repeatedly:: You must continue this! Devoted serevnt for life if you do! I s! :! ::continues bowing::
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  • From ANON - Eli on November 01, 2004
    this is great and no matter what anyone says this does have a plot. I hope this reveiw helps and i hope u write a lot more when i get some of my stories up woud u like to read them and review if so email me and i'll give u my author name cause it ain't eli. Yea i can't wait till friday ^-^
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  • From ANON - makusime on November 01, 2004
    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Molly on October 29, 2004
    Hi. Someone told me there was a post on this site by me, and I was disturbed to see that it was true. Where I don't really mind what was said (although I disagree with some of it), it bothers me that someone is posting as me. Please remove the post as soon as possible. Thank you.

    Molly
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  • From ANON - BakaChan003 on October 27, 2004
    I likes teh story muchly! I want more! I can't wait for the threesome! *bounces* That YukixShu lemon was goo~d *drool* Umm...yeah. I'm really looking forward to more chapters! *pats your back* Good author lady gets cookie! *hands you very large cookie*
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  • From ANON - Hiei449 on October 23, 2004
    dude!!!! loved it!!!! you have to continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ripley on October 23, 2004
    okay one thing to that guy that was totally wrong but you all ready got talk to about that so im not going to further that. anyways awesome story loving how they do it in the bathroom. especially for your first time. also lovin the sex outfit that yuki bought shu shuichi. also with ryuichi i love how he just gets down to business. i can't wait to see what you do the the three way well talk to you later

    bye
    Ripley

    P.S. i love the sex outfit i want one

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  • From ANON - Ripley on October 23, 2004
    okay one thing to that guy that was totally wrong but you all ready got talk to about that so im not going to further that. anyways awesome story loving how they do it in the bathroom. especially for your first time. also lovin the sex outfit that yuki bought for shuichi. also with ryuichi i love how he just gets down to business. i can't wait to see what you do with the three way well talk to you later

    bye
    Ripley

    P.S. i love the sex outfit i want one

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  • From ANON - Ripley on October 23, 2004
    okay one thing to that guy that was totally wrong but you all ready got talk to about that so im not going to further that. anyways awesome story loving how they do it in the bathroom. especially for your first time. also lovin the sex outfit that yuki bought for shuichi. also with ryuichi i love he jhe just gets down to business. i can't wait to see what you do with the three way well talk to you later

    bye
    Ripley

    P.S. i love the sex outfit i want one

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  • From ANON - Mizuki-chan on October 23, 2004
    Gomenasai! This is a add on to what I said above, to don't fuck with me, I just wanted to say that I myself am a writer and reader and would like to read some of your work. But it seems that I cannot find none so plz send or tell me where I might find them. Also just to let you know, Iam not some 12 year old pre-teen. Iam a 17 year teen. Just et yet you know don't know if you care or not but just getting it out there.

    Saiyounara!
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  • From ANON - Mizuki-chan on October 23, 2004
    WOW! This was really good Iurge you to continue! Now I have read some of the other reviews and find myself agreeing with some and not agreeing with others. For ex: What dumbfuck saiout out your fic and how bad it sucked I must disagree with him. You see he was just being an ass, now There are some parts that I do agree with on such as the plot, storyline and on how she needs to fill it in more, but you must rember this is but her first fic and is still in the works. I don't think dumbfuck should've been so cruel in critizing her work. Give her time to progress, don't just flame her like that, give her constructive critizism not bullshit. Now with most of the others I agree for a beginner I think this story has a lot of potential ^__^ I have read alot of fics in my time and for a beginner it's not have bad. So Erotic Goddess, do not listen to the dumbfuck and plz continue the story. ^_^ I can't wait for the nexted chapter.

    Jaa ne!
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  • From ANON - anna on October 21, 2004
    I love it! Yay! Lemon chapter! I can't wait for the next one! But Poor Shuichi. He has to wear that cock ring. I can't wait for the three-some. Will they use toys? Oh! They should! Anyway...Good story, adn I look forward to the next chapter.
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