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Reviews for I Couldn't Move On

By : Elvy
  • From satomika on September 08, 2014
    I LOVE IT!!!

    Ha~~~!

    It's so them~!

    I even love and enjoy the fact that Tessa know what happened between Sousuke and Kaname~ Hee~

    I want her to be green with envy~

    -Insert evil laugh-
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  • From ANON - chichi on July 26, 2014
    This is awesome man, please keep on writing!
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  • From kagomeisawsome26 on January 20, 2011
    you need to write more..you cant leave it at where it is! please?! :pouts:
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  • From Perpetual159 on May 01, 2007
    This story no doubt the best I've seen in this site or any other site, for that matter! Congratulations! Not only did you keep grammar and spelling errors close to nothing, but the story was also incredible! Your descriptive abilities are very creative, funny at times even, but most importantly easy to follow.

    But above anything else, the "Lemon" scene was pretty incredible. I find myself reading it repeatedly and believe that it is by far the best, most incredible, sexiest work I've come across. It's loving, yet sexy and Kinky at the same time... not too dirty, not too mushy... just perfect! I just wish I could see more of your Sousuke x Kaname work.

    All in all: Perfect! keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 13, 2006
    Such a great story. Is there going to be a sequel or another chapter? If so, then please email me when you do. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - tsukashi (NSI) on September 17, 2006
    Great story! You do an awesome job with Sousuke's character, well with all of them, actually. You cracked me up a few times. When Sousuke panicked about the kiss hehehehe. 'she made oral contact' I believe was the wording you used, OMG it was priceless!
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  • From ANON - Sadie on August 26, 2006
    Okay nuh-uh! Y;ou cannot leave it like that!! Not when youve set it up so perfectly for a continuation!!!! Btw loved the whole thing. Lol and I write a lot too, so I never notice the technical errors......I make a lot of them!


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  • From ANON - Kyle Muntz on August 12, 2006
    Wow. This was really good; one of the best FMP Panic fics i've read, and definately the best one on this site. It's nice to read something by an author that's actually talented. Anyway, I thought you did a very good job. The characters were in character, the writing itself was near perfect, and the sex scene was very well done. The whole piece had a very good feel to it.
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  • From ANON - ME on July 04, 2006
    thanks for writing this story. :] ive been looking for a GOOD, tasteful sousuke/kaname lemon for a long long time. hah, but really?! must you bring in evil-doers at the very end? -sigh- i guess that's just how these things go..
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  • From ANON - ladygemma on January 30, 2006
    What a wonderful fic!!! I love your characterizations of the two, they were spot on! And, haha Tessa got hers!! (Sorry I dislike Tessa A LOT) Are you planning to write a sequel to this? It seems like you set up for one. Please do!!! :D
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  • From ANON - butterflysuki on January 22, 2006
    Absolutely amazing! I was almost too embarrassed to upload my FMP fic after reading yours! It was like, what's the point? Anyway, awesome job!
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  • From ANON - Neko-chan on January 15, 2006
    You're FIRST fanfic? AND your first lemon? You're kidding me, right? ... This was amazing! I never expected to find an FMP! fic that was so completely in character, so utterly believable...and a lemon one at that! I am beyond impressed! I have never read a lemon so thoroughly researched; you made perfectly certain to cover every single base before allowing the characters to become sexually involved. That shows great skill as an author, and an amazing understanding and respect for the material AND the characters! You put them in a situation that was believable and that we, the readers, could feel for, as well as providing them with the proper motivations, materials, and state of mind in order to do so. That there is one of the reasons that I have never completed or posted a lemon of my own--it is soooo incredibly hard to reach all of those standards when manipulating characters not your own, and I myself would hate to post anything less. I have the utmost respect for you for being able to attain this level of writing.

    Thank you so much for such a WONDERFUL, well-written, pulse-racing read! I really hope you are considering (or will) writing more about Sousuke and Kaname in the future--there is so little truly well-written fanfiction out there on this wonderful pair, and you are one of the very few who seems capable of doing them justice. Keep up the outstanding work!
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  • From ANON - ladyakemi on January 04, 2006
    oh my god! awesome very detailed and their very into character. i usually dont review but this fic was that good! nice lemon cake, too! wheres the sequel, you are going to write on right? if you dont i may need to inform u that im ditintly related to a mithril agent and now how to use grenades! jk~
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  • From ANON - mel on January 04, 2006
    i liked it. was chapter six the last chapter? i hope it wasnt i like where you could go with this. so please continue.
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  • From ANON - shari on December 26, 2005
    Wow! This is the best FMP story I have read yet, and the most faithful to the show. All of the characters and events were believable and interesting. I would love to see more from you along the same lines. I am definitely interested in a sequel as well.
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