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By : BombaySuki
  • From Needlasch on February 07, 2007
    I hate you (not really). You made me actually cry during chapter 8. And I don't easily cry. But I loved the story anyway :) I love that pairing
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2007
    Haha...

    I've read your fic before at a different site (I think maybe fanart-central, back when it was cool and made sense), so this isn't really my views on your story or anything (ps, my views are 100% positive). I just thought your review sequence was funny.

    With each update, the number of words in all caps increased, the usage of the phrase "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!" became more and more redundant, and the threats and insults for your cruelty became enough to make Mr. Rogers want to swallow a cigarette butt off of the street.

    And yet, all of the same people kept returning, and at the end, when everything gets all happy, all you get is, "well, I'm glad you decided to wrap this up with a happy ending."

    That's all I really have to say.

    Toodles!!

    (I really did like your fic when I first read it, by the way.)
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on January 24, 2006
    Awww I'm so glad this is completed and has a happy ending! I was so disappointed when JJ died and thought "that can't be it" so I'm really glad that it wasn't and they were able to be together. Hope you're encouraged to write more fics! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on January 22, 2006
    I don't know whether to kiss you or kill you!! One minute things are great - JJ and Drake gettin' all cozy and such - and the next everything's gone to Hell!!! A bomb?!?! Jesus Christ!! You horrible meanie!! (not really!) Way to jerk someone around by the heartstrings!! ARRGH!! It was one Hell of a rollercoaster ride that's for sure!!! I'm just glad it all worked out in the end! Whew! You have no idea how many Kleenex I went thru in the last few chapters!! First I'm sobbing me heart out over JJ's death (big fat tears), then I'm bawling over Drake (more big tears), and finally I get to weep with joy over that wonderful beeping sound of the EKG machine!! Hooray!! I'm exhausted - but I loved every minute of it!!
    Koneko
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  • From ANON - Maka on October 24, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! He's not actually dead right?! RIGHT?! Oh god, I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat already and now you've givin me a cliffhanger! ARGH! You're the first one that I've read where I've actually liked this paring, so JJ can't die!

    I love your first person narritive by the way.

    I hope to read the next chapter soon!

    I truly love this story! It's so heartwrenching.

    maka
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  • From ANON - Orial on October 21, 2005
    god i'm such a sap. *sniffle* i'm crying right now reading this. Please say there's some sort of happy ending?
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  • From ANON - Enzeru on September 03, 2005
    ...*cries* OMG!! I CAN"T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT! It was good but GOD i hate sad endings! *cries so much that the room fills with tears*
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  • From ANON - Karasu-san on June 15, 2005
    I hate you....T_T not really, but still. *bawls and hugs JJ plushie and other products associated with JJ* WHY?! Oh well, keep going.
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  • From ANON - Lina Morley on May 29, 2005
    Oh my god I LOVE this fic!! It's on of the best Drake/JJ fics i've ever read!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - me on May 14, 2005
    Much applause... *applauds you* This is one of the best stories I've ever read on here no joke, dead serious. This is the first story on here to make me cry too. *continues to applaud you* I love it, pure and simple.
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  • From ANON - Shirubaa Kitsune on May 09, 2005
    What in seven hells is going on?! I'm so confused now.... and what took you so long to update hu?..... TT_TT I hate confusion.....
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  • From ANON - Mauztattoo on May 09, 2005
    AAGHHH! You Finally update and you break my heart! What's real and what's (pardon the pun) FAKE? Also, what's up with the formatting? It makes it pretty hard to read since I'm still on a pretty small old monitor. I've really enjoyed this and I want to see how you are wrapping up.
    P.S. Ted and Drake? Ick!
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  • From ANON - Mihoshi on May 09, 2005
    HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
    ARE YOU F**KING NUTS OR WHAT?
    WHATS THE BIG IDEA STOPPING AT A MOST CLIMATIC PART OF A FIC.
    I WAS ALMOST LOST ON WHO WAS SAYING WHAT, AND NOW THAT I CATCH UP, I GET TOSSED UP A PLOT TWIST.
    SO WHAT, IS JJ STILL A LIVE? WAS ALL THAT BAD THINKING JUST A NIGHTMARE FOR DRAKE?
    WILL YOU EVER........STOP.......THESE.....CLIFF.............HANGERS?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    THOSE TWO BETTER STAY TOGETHER OR I'LL SUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    On a positive note, great story so far; keep going please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - M. on May 03, 2005
    OMG. I love you. WRITE MORE!! There are so not enough Drake/JJ stories out there!! Gah. WOW.
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  • From ANON - Eriika on April 04, 2005
    UHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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