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Reviews for Crossing the Line

By : HauntedReality
  • From ANON - De Lazy Lady Lime on December 25, 2004
    Aloha!
    Another great chappie!! Infact a pretty messy chappy. Wow talk about take a situation from bad to worse! Well, hopefully this whole mess can be resolved semi peacefully. Geeze I hope Kaoru won't get hurt too badly. I'm figuring that her running into the woods is where she runs into more trouble. I'm glad you are still writing!! Keep it up girl!!

    Merry Christmas!!

    ~De Lazy Lady Lime
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on December 25, 2004
    i luv it, but i hope there's a happy ending to this all *cries* ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;


    *(**(~ Let your mind fly with new ideas and new adventures~)**)*
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  • From ANON - Clemen on December 24, 2004
    Poor Kaoru. I wasn't expected that from Kensin and Kaoru. Good chapter. Hope you update soon. Until then, take care. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Later
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  • From thebigW on December 21, 2004
    Most excellent!

    The convict was quite the philosopher, reading his enemy perfectly. So sorry it ended the way it did. Is it Kenshin's fault that he can't express himself to Karou that all this had to happen? How much will you have him pay for that shortcoming? Karou should have known him better and approached him herself before all this unraveled. Poor Megumi. What will become of her? Is it her own fault also that she can't tell Sano how she really feels? I guess this is what happens when everybody waits around for the next person to actually DO something.
    Keep it up.
    W.
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  • From ANON - NUNI on December 17, 2004
    Hi! I like this sory it's nice and sentimental and kind of deep. Kaoru really has to do something about he mix feelings for both guys, just as an idea why not make it a tri: KenshinxKaoruxSano. Anyway I like the way you are writing this fic, can't wait to read some more.
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on December 15, 2004
    oh no ! please let Kenshin and Kaoru be together ^^;;; I hope it was a mistake, Kenshin doen't deserve that much pain. I hope it was just a mistake, other wise I would just cry ^^;;;




    Kaoru-chan (onegai K/K )


    oh and Buso is spelled like this ^^ BUSU lol
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  • From ANON - De Lazy Lady Lime on December 14, 2004
    Hi!

    I really like this fanfic. But, I have a really strong like towards Kenshin you see. And well these last chapters have been chalked full of pain for him. While I am used to the torture that Kenshin receives. I really wonder how this is all going to turn out. Megumi obviously has feeling for the Rooster head and Kenshin is as usual head over heels for Kaoru...So this leaves it all up to Kaoru. What is she going to do?


    Oh please dont be discouraged as to whether you get lots of reviews or no reviews. Sometimes people just don't know what to say...Some authors are pleased just to get a "Update" review. You are doing a find job with your fanfiction. If you are patient they will come...a bit slow but they'll catch on eventually. I mean if you start small you could have it all.

    I hope you are able to update soon...this last cliffy leaves the Kenshin-gumi in quite a pinch. *ouch*

    ~De Lazy Lady Lime

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  • From ANON - mariska on December 11, 2004
    I really like your story, but PLease don't let it end here!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on November 29, 2004
    *eyes water* that was sad and yet.... oh so exciting ^^ I hope that Kenshin does something or that Kaoru runs into Kenshin and tells him what had happen between her and Sano.


    Kaoru-chan


    -always do what makes you feel right withn in your heart
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  • From ANON - anonymous Reader on November 25, 2004
    Wow... That was really cool. The narration was absolutely intense. One could feel or even live in that situation so explicitly described. Great ways of keeping up the characters' personalities. Marvelous job on the fight scenarios (very full of action). This story is well-planned out and well-organized. If this could be a graded creative paper, it would have definitely earned more than five stars for the tremendous effort put into this piece of work. Awesome and outstanding job. Keep up the great work and good luck with updates! (Better update soon too! [I cannot wait!])
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on November 24, 2004
    *claps* another well written chapter. * bounces up and down* I hope there will be another one coming out very soon ^^ *smiles* please don't keep me waiting to long (or else u shall pay)
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  • From ANON - Video Vixen on November 19, 2004
    Here comes Kaoru and Sano sitting in a tree kissing first come love them comes marriage then a bad ass Kenshin to mess it all up. I hope you post soon!
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  • From ANON - Alabaster Dragon on November 19, 2004
    Your doing a wonderful job of developing the relationship and not falling into some of the mistakes early fanfiction writers by speeding up the relationship just to get to a outcome. I vote yes for lemon Please!
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  • From ANON - Sexy Hanyou on November 19, 2004
    Sounds to me like Sano & Kaoru and starting to turn up the romance button! I can't wait to read the next chapter and as for your lemon I would like to read but it is entirely up to you.
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  • From ANON - Albino Elf on November 19, 2004
    It helps if you start writing lemons in every story because then you can get go practice. I like your story either way but I also love reading lemons too. Ja Ne!
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