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Reviews for Crossing the Line

By : HauntedReality
  • From ANON - TLC on November 19, 2004
    If you feel comfortable writing a lemon I say go for it and using it as a completion to the relationship is fine.
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  • From ANON - Wolf Demon on November 12, 2004
    Oh no with Kenshin gone for quite some time that could be the perfect opporunity for the best friends to become more than just that. I await the chapter and hope to read soon.
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  • From ANON - Venus on November 12, 2004
    I wish I could have a big tall muscular gorgeous man crade whe when I getappoappointed with certain but I can't be that lucky I guess that's why I read so much fanfiction because they are my knights in shinning armor. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - Diva Queen on November 12, 2004
    It just keeps getting better and better with each chapter you write. I thought putting the dream was a wonderful way to end the chapter it forshadowed future chapters.
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  • From ANON - Albino Elf on November 12, 2004
    It looks like Sano is starting to feel develop different feelings for our favorite kendo instructor. Also showing how Kenshin feels really showed why he must continue to atone for his past.

    It will be very intriuging to see how long Sano will stay loyal to his Kenshin. Ja Ne!
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  • From ANON - Sexy Hanyou on November 12, 2004
    I wonder what the confortation going to look like when everything is all settled and done with your awesome story here. I have a question will there be any lemons! I mean if there isn't I understand and won't stop rea I a I am just asking.
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  • From ANON - TLC on November 12, 2004
    I don't know about Kagome & Kouga I personally love the hanyou to much read alt pairings in Inuyasha but I bet you will do a wonderful job with it. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Alabaster Dragon on November 12, 2004
    I think your charactiztion for this story is dead on and for a first time writer that is very tough to do but it just show how much you inderstand the characters and their traits.
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  • From ANON - Pixie Elf on November 12, 2004
    So now it is really starting to get intersting Kaoru had Sano on the brain and Sano was thinking about why it hurt so much for Kaoru to call out Kenshin name you are doing a tremdous job of evolving the plot.
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  • From ANON - Albus the great on November 12, 2004
    You did an excellent job focusing on all of the characters feelings in this chapter. I can't wait to read the nexr chapter please post as soon as you can this is truly an awesome fic.
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  • From ANON - kallipygia on November 10, 2004
    This is a great story! You're very witty, I loved the banter between all characters, and Sano's attempts to help Kenshin get ready for the date. You're also doing a wonderful job of characterization with everyone. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. (Although, I find myself wondering why the police didn't seaitou afu after the escaped convict; he's Kenshin's equal and he already works for the pe...e...?)
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  • From ANON - Litalya-Chan on November 10, 2004
    Hola!!!! I just saw your story, otherwise I would have reviewed sooner. Wow! Don't see too many stories that have the potential of Kaoru ending up w/our favorite rooster head ^.^ but that's ok, I actually don't mind that pairing! Just one question: is this going to be a single pairing (you don't have to say who she'll end up with) or an actual Sano/Kaoru/Kenshin type of threesome? Hey, I could go either way *grins lecuslyusly*. In fact, I think it would be kinda hot if you did a threesome *fans herself* whoo! Anyways, all my bullsh*t aside, I just wanted to say hi and I love your story and I can't wait until the next installment! More chappies soon, ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Kaoru-chan on November 08, 2004
    I'm lovin your story and I hope the next chapte will be out soon
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  • From ANON - Clemen on November 08, 2004
    What a jerk. Forget Kenshin. Go Sano. Hope you update soon. Until then, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - Pixie Elf on November 08, 2004
    I surprised that Megumi actually helped Kaoru get ready for her dinner with Kenshin because I thought she always had a thing for him. I quess it just goes to show how charming sano can be when he wants something for somebody. See you Later.
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