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Reviews for Crossing the Line

By : HauntedReality
  • From ANON - Venus on November 08, 2004
    After everything Sano and Kaoru went thorugh to get ready for this wonderful evening it had to be ruined by Kenshin sense of duty and honor. I can understand Kaoru pain but on the plus there is a bishie ready to take over.
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  • From ANON - Ring Master on November 08, 2004
    Man Kaoru can't win can she finally she gets to spend some alone time with Kenshin and wasn't going to bothered but whats happens a idiot making mischef and making Kenshin leave to go take care of it. Poor Kaoru!
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  • From ANON - Mega Man on November 08, 2004
    Wow it just keeps getting better and better as the story progress. I do have one question for you. How long do you think this is going to be chapter wise? Becasue I hope it is really long because I love the way you write.
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  • From ANON - Baby Boy on November 08, 2004
    I like the way you protrayed the feelings of Kaoru in this chapter. She just wanted the chance for him to take notice of her and her feelings and she happy he makes but unforunately when duty calls Kenshin must go.
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  • From ANON - Diva Queen on November 08, 2004
    Bad, Bad, Kenshin pretty soon Kaoru isn't going to sit around and wait for you because right around the corner is a sexy rooster head waiting in the wings just for the right woman.
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  • From ANON - Video Vixen on November 08, 2004
    Ooooh! Now it is starting to get really good. Kaoru feels getting neglected from kenshin why does that not surprise me but I quess that's why the unrequired love huh. Please post more of this great story soon.
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  • From ANON - Linkin Logs on November 08, 2004
    I still don't believe that this is your first story written it is to good. Well on to the chapter review, everything was going good up until the ending I wonder when Sano will start to think about in the romantic way. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Albino Elf on November 08, 2004
    Kaoru gets all dolled up for kenshin and what does he did but run off to to stop somebody that the police should be able to take care of easily. Poor Kaoru maybe Sano can take her out and show her a good time.
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  • From ANON - Psy Face on November 08, 2004
    Baka, baka, baka, and did I mention what a baka kenshin can be sometimes. Kaoru must feel like she always plays second best in heart. I wonder what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - Albus the great on November 08, 2004
    I wonder how many more plans can Sanosuke do to bring K & K together, I never figured him for being the sharpest tool in the shed but he actually plays a pretty good matchmaker until he falls in love wihe ghe girl.
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  • From ANON - Wolf Demon on November 08, 2004
    She gets all dressed for Kenshin and is floating on cloud nine but he has to go and ruin it by playing the hero once again but I guess that's why we love him so much. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - TLC on November 08, 2004
    Man, Sano was was actually working until baka had to go save the day with his sword. I mean don't get me wrong I like Kenshin, but there is just something about them being tall, dark haired, and carries the kanji for evil on his back Give me Sanosuke or Zanza anyday of the week andf I will tejustjust how much it pays to be bad.

    I loved it.
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  • From ANON - kouga kun on November 08, 2004
    Sorry I didn't review sooner this website can be tough to get into sometimes. I thank you for such the quick update. I liked this chapter I especially liked Kaoru reaction to Kenshin taking her out ot dinner. It is too bad that he couldn't. Update soon Please.
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  • From ANON - Sexy Hanyou on November 08, 2004
    Poor Kaoru, you sometimes have to wonder where Kenshin's heart really is. Dinner with a beauitful woman or getting into a fight. I hope Sano takes her to dinner and treats her to an great evening.
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  • From ANON - kouga kun on November 07, 2004
    How about she has both of them I know I wouldn't having them both.
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