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By : Klepto
  • From ANON - Kiki on May 11, 2005
    PLEASE create a sequal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Flamebrake on April 30, 2005
    sweet and yet sad at the same time...
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  • From ANON - Dr.Von Doom on February 25, 2005
    how tragic(evil laugh) is dartz read this he'd be in tears,unlike me,who doesn't have those emotions.
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  • From ANON - Yamilisa on January 16, 2005
    Man, such a sad ending. But the lemon was *hot*!
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  • From ANON - Brandon on June 28, 2004
    I really liked your story and i think you should continue it , it could end up becoming a truely amazing story , or atleast a really good happy or sad story.
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  • From ANON - Merebear on April 08, 2004
    I don't how how you do it but please contiue the story it is so good
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  • From ANON - Meg on March 30, 2004
    This story is so good!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I want to see what happens with them, there aren't a lot of good Ash-Gary pairings out there and this one has some major potential!! I'l lbe waiting, if you feel like emailing me, go for it!! You're the greatest!!
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  • From ANON - cassie on January 07, 2004
    awww your story was sweet and good i really liked it
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  • From ANON - HellFenix on November 14, 2003
    finally!! someone did an Ash/ Gary lemon!! go you!
    that was a really wierd style of wrting though... and i'm impressed! it worked! big time!!
    though those little wierd voices in Ash's head were... scary...
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  • From ANON - anonymous on October 23, 2003
    I thought that the story was absolutely beautiful and romantic. I don't think Gary should have left Ash, I mean after he made love to him in all. I think he should stayed with him. I also think that they make such a beautiful couple too, I hope that you write chapter 2 real soon, because I can't wait to finish reading it.
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  • From ANON - Yami Kamura on September 04, 2003
    All together now....AWW. I really enjoyed this!! Keep up the great work...ermm...AIM RPs? I wub you! *tears, glomps*
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  • From ANON - kimpisces on June 26, 2003
    Hi! That was sooo cute....*wipes her tears* lol
    Seriously though...That was an awesome story...
    ~KIM~
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  • From ANON - Vesta on June 18, 2003
    This was a cute story, it was pretty good. Just a few minor things though...

    ~Gary and Ash are kind of OoC in this fic. The whole bit at the end was very OoC, and in the beginning.
    ~The sex scene was pretty good, but I don't think that Gary would be as loving as he was to Ash.
    ~When you write stories by way of IM conversation, it's a little confusing and kind of hard to follow.

    Overall, it was good, but be sure to take those things into consitiontion the next time you write a fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2003
    I DO hope there is another chapter or story. This is great!
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  • From ANON - Lady Kaiba on April 21, 2003
    ::eye twitch:: Are you ever going to continue this, or not? **Glomp** Thanks for telling me about this site!!! I think I'll ...o...once I have other stories written........^____^

    Lara: o_o; LK is a little.........wierd today. I think it's because she's 1) not feeling 100% (alot of dizzyness) and 2)..............uh.......I have no other excuse.....Oh, right...It's just her. -_-''

    LK: ::grin:: ::wince:: Head-ache......@.@

    Lara:...................I......plead insanity for my *dear* hikari....................::sweat drop:: **thwack** ::hit by shoe:: Oo WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!

    LK: ::blinkblink:: I didn't do it!!!

    Lara: Then *who* did?!?

    LK: ::points at yami Bakura::

    Y. Bakura: ::sneaking away, snickering::

    Lara: Where do you think *you're* going?!

    Y. Bakura: ::runs away, Lara hot on his tracks::

    Lara: GET BACK HERE!!!!

    Y. Bakura: Meheheheheheheh~!!!

    LK: Oo A true psycho.............. Oh, gomen Klepty-chan for the wacky review....I'm seriously out of it tonight.......::pauses:: And don't kill me for calling you Klepty-chan~!!!! Please? ::runs away to write Inuyasha ficcy::
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