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Reviews for Gemstone Eyes

By : tareacel
  • From ANON - Berserker on January 15, 2005
    This is a really good fanfic! I have to admit I only flew over most of the Omi/Ken parts, that were not plot-relevant. But I loved the way you built up the story and chracterized the charcters. I especially loved the scenes at the "final fantasy". What I didn't like was the schizo you gave Aya in the later chapters, and the way Youji reacts to it and narrows down Aya to "Ran", ignoring the Aya part, and in fact using it against Aya. In fact I really didn't like any of the distinction between "Aya" and "Ran". It makes the character seem too schizo for my liking.
    On the other hand I really loved how you generated the tension between Aya and Youji, outlining how complicated things between those two are. Also I liked that the characters were behaving somewhat realistic most of the time.
    Overall a very good story!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 15, 2005
    Tease... BUt I still love this stroy, and can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2005
    Your description of Yohji's room made me think a lot of how Drew's half of our room looked...
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  • From ANON - lonewolves66 on January 10, 2005
    Yay! Another great chapter, I love. They're finally together!!!1 I liked how you built everything up to that moment, great job as usual. Update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - lonewolves66 on January 10, 2005
    Okay, I love this story. IT HAS -PLOT-! Don't be discouraged if people don't review, I don't see people review much on here. If you want reviews, I suggest you post this on fanfiction.net but tone-down the sex parts (they only except R-rated matieral) But this story is probably one of the best I've read on here. It's not the usual PWP, which gets very annoying, I like plot. And lemon too ,of course, but building up to it is always nice, no? It makes you feel like you -know- the characters. But that's just my stupid thoughts. I've only read up to this chapter I'm reviewing on, but I saw your A/N note and thought I should tell you what I think. IT'S AWESOME, DON'T STOP/BE DISCOURAGED! ^^' I lub K/O, A/Y. You detail everything perfectly, and the lemon... 0_0 Woah. Lol. You kept it going for like 5-6 chapters? @.@; ::bows to teh master:: Um, again good work, I love.
    P.S.: If anyone gives you crap that they don't like it (I haven't read the reviews so I dunno), but tell 'em to screw off. It's your idea and your alone, if they don't like it, Don't R-E-A-D. XD' I'll stop my ranting/bitching/nice/long comment.
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  • From ANON - Lee on January 09, 2005
    I totally adore you for this fanfiction. It's brillant.
    Since I'm from Germany and my native language isn't
    english, I'll leave it with those words.
    I don't want to confuse anyone.

    Still waiting for more
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  • From ANON - lo on January 08, 2005
    Again you have posted a wonderful chapter. The story is developing very nicely. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2005
    You didn't get on at all last night and I got worried you might have died or something!!! But you updated, so I know you're alive *looks relieved*

    -M
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  • From aimless38 on January 08, 2005
    Did I say you were evil? I am now convinced of it...Heh. Wonderful chapter my dear. Hell of a place to leave it though. I am so ready for some Yohji and Ran goodness. I loved the line about kissing in the rain. You ought to comission a picture for that scene. Try http://bishonenworks.com/index.htm
    It is an awesome site! It is full of Weiss art. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
    Hugs
    Amy

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  • From ANON - Crimson Blade on January 08, 2005
    HATRED!!! IT BURNS WITHIN! It buuuuuurrrrrrnnnnnnsssss like a thousand firey suns! *we interupt this rant to give you a special annoucement* *ahem* Continue! Please? *puppy eyes* *now back to you your normal program* BUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSSSssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.....!
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  • From aimless38 on January 08, 2005
    Wow!! That was stunning and emotionally powerful! Ran will either kiss him back or kill him. I will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter! I salute you! This fic is a refreshing change from the many angst, rape, torture fics out there. Not that angst is bad some of the best Weiss fics I have read have all those elements but a steady diet of them is not fun. BRAVO!!
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  • From aimless38 on January 08, 2005
    Arrgghh....more sex...in the hallway! **sticks head in a bucket of ice** Hot and wicked, just the way I like it! Then they confronted Ran. I am surprised they are still standing..Aya's temper is legendary. I love how you balance emotion, plot, hot sex and wonderful dialogue and descriptions perfectly. Another incredible chapter.
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  • From aimless38 on January 08, 2005
    More Omi and Ken goodness...sigh. Omi is quite talented isn't he? The little minx! Oh Oh Poor Aya...That was so very sad when he was talking to his sister. (sob!)
    He needs some love! (sniffle) Bravo dear!
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  • From aimless38 on January 08, 2005
    Eeep! It has hit the fan now hasn't it? A fight. Oh man how are they going to fix this? Ooh a bit of angst..I love it!
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  • From aimless38 on January 08, 2005
    Awwww post coital huggles and cuddles. Poor Aya! Then the mutual masterbation..ack you torture them so. Great job dear!
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