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Reviews for Who Do You Love

By : Kjen2229
  • From ANON - Midnight on December 12, 2004
    O.o

    And again... O.o

    I liked but it could stand more detail... *nods* But of course, no pressure. It was kinda hard to ppicture Yuri and Touma make love... But all in all i twas cool

    Please write more Gravi fics, you've got the potential!

    --Midnight--
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  • From ANON - Midnight on December 11, 2004
    Well...

    What next? Don't keep me in suspense!! O.o

    Can't wait until you update again!

    =^-^=

    --Midnight--
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  • From ANON - Midnight on December 04, 2004
    Hmmm... Well I like the idea but I think you need to fix Act 2... It's the same as Act 1

    I like how your going about this and hope you update, but i have one thing to say about this fic"

    The script form. Believe me when I say that it will read much better if you add detail with the emotions and ad a daioloug. *can't spell*

    If you like, you can contact me and I will GLADLY help you.

    Update soon and fix Act 2!

    --Midnight--
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