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Reviews for Birthday Fever

By : Sephiress
  • From ANON - nadia on January 12, 2006
    I'can book doujinshi hentai, misao & aoshi (birthday fever)
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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on December 20, 2004
    Stellar! For your first lemon this is excellent! Hell, it's good for any lemon. Now, write another one.

    Tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - Me on November 28, 2004
    hey chcia~
    i love it but then i love alll your story, but i still like Dlg the best...lol, well what can i say it was an excellent lemon. It's hard to believe that was your first one. lol. u sure u havent written one before???? lol...well ur iming me so im goonna go talk to you
    ttyl, Brandy
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  • From ANON - LadyShiva on November 27, 2004
    Very cute! I don't think we can ever have too many AxM fics here at aff. I only noticed a few small descrepinces, such as someone other than Misao calling Aoshi "Aoshi-sama", which they never do as far as I know. I think Okon and Omasu might call his Aoshi-kun, haha. Oh and, I dare say that even in the late 1800's, Misao would have been considered a woman much younger than 18. laws of consent and whatnot didnt get instated untill much later. oh and..what was it..Something you said about the feeling not "aboding" well made me giggle. Abode means like a house, I think you want bode. Anyway, the lemon was great! Perfectly sweet and squishy XD I hope to read more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Beth on November 27, 2004
    Pretty damn good for a first time...
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  • From ANON - KyteAura on November 25, 2004
    It was loveable ^-^ I think you are pretty sweet on the lemons. Maybe add more sex or more screams of Aoshi XD I've always liked that ^-^; But it was seriously yummie--good--sour--all in all, I'd give it a great big "OH HELL YEAH!!!"
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  • From ANON - ! on November 24, 2004
    Wonderful. I wuv it. =D
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  • From ANON - The Last Samurai on November 23, 2004
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this. u rock dude.
    u should delve into citrus more often

    this was fun to read and it was VERY well written.

    bless
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  • From ANON - animelo on November 23, 2004
    Great fic. Please continue with another. Can never get enough of Misao/Aoshi
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